|Reviews for Quest for camelot: Ruber's revenge|
| monkeymouse7906 chapter 4 . 11/18/2013
you need a scene to show when to make their marriage offical please add on
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/17/2013
You just must whrite a love scen plizzzzz
A love scen please
| Kimonos4me chapter 4 . 10/29/2013
I would live to see a love scene :)
| Kate chapter 4 . 8/24/2013
Please make a sex scene
| Serenity'sfire98 chapter 4 . 6/3/2013
I would like a scene between Kayley and Garret. Please continue, because this is wonderful!
| WyldClaw chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
what a wonderful start!
| FrostRose chapter 4 . 10/20/2012
i think it would be awesome if you out that in! also, where's the fire? slow down! you don't describe whats going on and how the characters got somewhere. love the plot though and i really think you could go far with this.
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/30/2012
I love it please continue and add in a love scene!
| Keari chapter 4 . 6/28/2012
I love it do far I don't like the whole paragraph thing it is very distracting. I think it'd be great to have a ahem wedding scene lol
| aki chapter 4 . 5/12/2011
i vote yes
| TheFreakyTomboy chapter 4 . 11/29/2010
Yaay love it. I hope ypu update soon!
And i think it would be nice with a love scene
| Twilightemmett chapter 4 . 11/27/2010
Yesssss that would be sweet
| I.C.2014 chapter 3 . 8/24/2010
Who was that person with Ruber? Please update soon so that I can find out.
| Darling Dani chapter 2 . 8/9/2010
This story seems a little rushed to me and there are a few grammar mistakes but I just fell in love with the plot. Great job! :)
| lovesaphira chapter 3 . 6/20/2010
umm...well...i like the idea for it. However, i don't like how you've written it. You need to add paragraphs. I find it distracting how everything just rolls on and on. Separate the lines when a new character speaks and separate the action and describing into smaller paragraphs.
Also, i don't like that Kayley didn't care about her mother enough to go and visit. Julianna is sick and possibly dying. If i were Kayley i would go and see how she's doing. But that's just a personal thing.
And another thing, i believe Kayley is twenty in the movie so in actuality she'd be about twenty-one in this fanfic.
And finally, it's Ruber, not Rubba. having the double B in there makes it sound like Rubber.
Okay that's all. Sorry about all the criticism but i really think this fanfiction could be so much better if you fixed some of your writing techniques and spelling and stick to the basic facts of the movie.