|Reviews for Guards of the Students HIATUS|
| howlingwindofthestorm chapter 3 . 4/7/2011
a good chapter, and no for yaoi! i can't stand the stuff!
| howlingwindofthestorm chapter 2 . 1/29/2011
i don't really like yaoi couples, i prefer either no couples or straight couples peronally, it's more realistic.
| renee chapter 3 . 8/4/2010
| natalie chapter 3 . 8/4/2010
against da yaoi / ...plz continue...
| IPreferLemonPie chapter 3 . 6/24/2010
It waaas AWESOME. I know it's in hiatus but pweez pweez pweez pretty pweez continue it! I loooove it! Sasuke is way too AWESOME. And I'm against YAOI and pweez the main pairing make it be SasuSaku 3 FAVES3 You are an aawesome author!
| Miyoko Nazumi chapter 3 . 6/13/2010
i do believe that this is going to be quite interesting
seriously tho, its definitaley a story i will be looking forward to reading!
| Kumiko-oneechan chapter 3 . 2/22/2010
really nice story!
i'm all for yaoi as long as it doesn't get too intense and it's not the main couple! So put me down for yaoi if it's this thing that i just described
can't wait to see what will happen next!
| abcdefgh love chapter 3 . 2/20/2010
OMG. Please please please don't have a yaoi coupling :D And i really really hope that it would be a SasuSaku story (x hahaha, yes, i'm a big big fan of sasusaku :D
Anyway, it's an awesome story, (x Keep it up! ;D But, you may want to have some sentence breaks in the speeches? it seemed a bit too long for me..? :x LOL No offence though, just my opinion :D heh.
| Do-Not-Like-Yaoi. ew chapter 3 . 2/18/2010
Against... - . -
| Akatsuki Sakura Uchiha chapter 3 . 2/17/2010
awesome chapter! I was surprise Naruto knows new vocabulary. I vote against it for yaoi. I cant wait for the next chapter!
| Twisted Musalih chapter 3 . 2/17/2010
Great chapter! Cant wait to read the next chapter. Update soon
| Angelic Sakura Blossom chapter 3 . 2/17/2010
depends on the couple if I would be against or for yaoi. It will most likely be a no. I love it! Sakura is the only one paying attention. If I were her then just to spite them I wouldn't have told them anything when they asked!
| dancingqueensillystring chapter 3 . 2/17/2010
This is good. I really liked it. Sakura is going to hit Sasuke eventually right? Please
I mean, I personally kind of like Sasuke but that does not take away from the fact that he needs a kick in the butt and probably one every else as well. So, it would be really nice if Sakura was the one to deliver said kick/kicks.
Although, now that I think about it, what would be even more awesome is if she slapped him with her super strength. He'd be all like, "Oh it's just a slap from weak puny little Sakura, no need to dodge, besides I DESERVE it for being such a JERK to her and being INCONSIDERATE of everyone else's feelings and running off like a coward AND TRAINING UNDER A PEDOPHILE SNAKE LORD DUDE THING ANDANDAND JUST BEING OBNOXIOUS AND HORRIBLE AND ALL AVENGE/REVENGEY IN GENERAL! (Although, don't worry Sasucakes, I still think you're the hottest thing since waffles)"
And then she'd slap him and he'd fly back hundred feet and be all like, Woah.
End of story, it would be awesome.
But, don't feel pressured to do so, just know that I will cry and sob forever and ever if you don't and its quite possible the world might end, so yeah, no pressure whatsoever.
Anyway, now that I've rambled a sufficient amount, I just want you to know how great of a job I think you did on this chapter. Please update soon. Oh and sorry about Sasu's little rant up there, I-oh, did I say I, I meant Sasuke, he gets a little worked up about these things. There there, Sasuke Princess, Dancingqueensillystring is here for you.
| CrystalPrison chapter 3 . 2/17/2010
Well I don't know about your standards...but this definately meets my standards...and I tend to have high standards. _ Just saying...
Anyways...I liked this chapter a lot...cause it's good to know Sasuke and Naruto still have a portion of there relationship completely in tact...and I can definately see Kakashi reading his beloved porn during a briefing...poor Saukra's going to be trapped with them...they'll be covered with bruises at the end of it all...those poor wizards are going to think they're in bad relationships or getting attacked in the halls...
oh...And Sasuke's argument with Naruto was definately well done. NarutovocabularyYay! I can go for him out-arguing Sasuke any day. And the fact Sasuke didn't deny the pedophilla...any new person that would hear that...would probably die.
And as for your minor issue mentioned at the end...I would honestly stop trying to think about it, read a couple fics, relax, eat some good food...and work from there. You've already got your sequel, so work for something that gets to that (obviously), you know, build up relationships, set the stage for it, foreshadow, throw in some humor, a bit of fighting or exploration...
Honestly...I do my best writing and plotting at ten at night just after a bowl of ice cream, while watching TV.
But if you ever wanna bounce off plot ideas...I tend to work as a beta for my friend...so I'm always open to review stuff.
Hope you update soon! And Enjoy the long review. Now go eat some ice cream and plot.
| Ms. I-don't-have-an-account chapter 2 . 2/9/2010
You are really good at writing, and I love this story! And I am happy you changed some of the characters a bit... They were kind of annoying. This is the first fic I am reading were Minerva is Heasmistress, tho, and I'm looking forward to reading how her personality will be. Keep up the good work!