Reviews for Deep in Darkness
lastchancetolive chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Just channel that anger! That's what poetry's about,expressionism. Love the poem and keep up the good work.
MamzelleCombeferre chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
This was really pretty. It had a really nice flow to it and I can see Charlie writing something like this. Have you thought about writing a series of these? Like different poems that chronicle Charlies life after the Dead Poets?
DeadPoet0712 chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
First off, your sister really is an ass for giving you problems with your writing of poetry. There is nothing wrong with it! In fact, I'm glad you write poetry. There needs to be more poets in the world. So good for you for sticking with it!

Beautiful poem. Rather haunting in a way. I enjoyed it and I'm sure I'll read it again. Hope to see more work from you soon!

P.S. I always wondered if Charlie felt responsible in the end because of the article.