|Reviews for Luminance in the Sky|
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/23
Can you start the second part of the two shot you started with Yuri's trek to Aurnion? Please? I really want to see how Yuri reacts to Sodia and how angry Flynn is in being locked up.
| Double-Gemini chapter 3 . 5/22/2012
"P.S. Make Yuri cry Please"
Did I seriously just read that in one of your reviews?
Anyway, great story (or one shot that's actually a two shot) and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Don't worry, I hardly played the game myself and as far as I can tell, it seems fine to me. Also, I can tell that you think of Sodia the same way I do; meaning some one needs to give her one gigantic bitch slap. As for making this a YuriXFlynn or not nonsense, feel free to do what ever you want. It's your story and you're free to do what ever you want (except claim ownership of said characters and franchise) and I can't wait to see what happens next.
| Velveteenrabbit chapter 3 . 6/24/2010
*bitchslaps sodia* Hmm, the only problem I have with this chapter is that, as a mere captain, Sodia wouldn't have the authority to order men to do anything to the Commandant. Otherwise, I am so curious to see what happens next. Update soon?
| Azure-Wulfe chapter 3 . 6/8/2010
Interesting story premise, really can't wait for the next part :3
Sodia needs a swift kick up the backside, seriously .
| CrystallizedPen chapter 3 . 6/7/2010
Well, Sodia is being a little bit annoying at the end, after all how much the two friends want to see each other. But, that will definetely make me want to read the next chapter. Please do update soon!
| samanthA chapter 2 . 11/22/2009
I like the story so far... love the effort you put in the descriptions and imagery. Sodia getting rejected by an emo Flynn was hilarious. :)
As for the pairings, could you please PLEASE keep it friendship? All I see are nonsensical Flynn x Yuri stories that completely changes how one of them acts, and it doesn't make any sense to me! If anything they have a bromance. Flynn and Yuri are total bros. I don't see anything in the game or whatever that suggests that they're romantically involved like that, but you almost never see stories where they aren't f*ing each other and having some good old fashioned bro like rivalry and strong friendship. I mean, this is just my opinion, but I think making this a romantic story woud kind of take away from the actual story of it... bromantic stories all the way! :)
Keep on writin'!
| Winged Senea chapter 2 . 11/18/2009
Although I might be grossly outnumbered by the yaoi fangirls...can you keep it friendship? There so few of them when their just friends so its nice to see a great story like this every once in a while, so please if you can. Flynn's not overly out of character, he's young here so it would make sense he'd be out of it a little. But it suits him for what you've done. For the promise, you can probably watch it on youtube but here it is as well:
Flynn: We would fight to make people smile
Yuri: Even if we follow different paths
Flynn Even if we bear different burdens
Yuri: Even if people praised us, or hated us.
Flynn: The knights and the guilds won't change
Yuri: There are places in each of us the other can't reach
Flynn: That's why we're not alone
...There might have been more but that was when they just finihsed fighting each other. Hope that helps anyways. I love your theme with fireflies, and I hope to see this updated soon. Good writing!
| anondabunny chapter 2 . 11/15/2009
Wah? Why does everyone want Yuri to be big bad seme, and Flynn the little fluffy uke? Even when Yuri is with Raven, Yuri's on top! Why? Can't a simple yaoi fan-girl have a cute little Yuri fall victim to big bad perverted Raven or Flynn? Please? A little FlynnxYuri is all I ask...
Sorry, just being over dramatic XD.
P.S. Make Yuri cry Please
| little1991 chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
it certainly is cute alright. but it's not too out of character either. after all, yuri would probably go making a blunt comment about something. while flynn would be discouraged for making a mistake. it actually reminds me of a little parody something made of them. i'll send you the link if you contact me.
| nibeijia chapter 2 . 11/15/2009
PLEASE make it YurixFlynn. I love your writing :D and Flynn isn't overly out of character. Don't worry
| RaeMina chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
Very well written and very cute my only guff is that it's canon that Estelle never left the castle, which I think means the building itself.
Still, it is lovely 3
| Seraphic Dragon chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
Hmm, what do I think? I think this story needs to be favorited! *faves* Good job, I didn't think either Yuri or Flynn were too out of character.
Personally it would be pretty crazy if Yuri acted exactly the same as an orphan child/teen as he did when he was a full adult. It makes more sense for him to be a bit more childish. Even still, I didn't think Yuri was out of character that much.