Reviews for Hidden
onlyLana chapter 18 . 3/16
the conclusion is silly, the experience of many years together, to grow as a person, to understand things, would have made Clark realize what he need to do, not to hide again. thats quite immature.
the reason they did what they did in the series is because they forced the relationship to end because of Lois. why do we need to do that here?
onlyLana chapter 8 . 3/16
quite silly that everyone asks who the father is. if i remember correctly Lana is not that kind of girl.
also, quite stupid of Clark to lie about how he come back!
Kazrock1 chapter 18 . 1/4/2010
well i like this story but i didnt like the last 2 chapters... i knew that will happened. i understand that the way smallville in tv show but i like to change some things

if i were you... clark needs to fight jor-el about his life and their daughter live as well as Lana. so he didnt have to choose by jor-el's orders, that's what my opionion (SP?) im not good spells
Jeremy Shane chapter 18 . 12/27/2009
good story

Too Bad it didn't work out for Clark & Lana
Chlollie4eva chapter 16 . 12/22/2009
those were a nice 2 chapters though it would have been cool to see clark and lana introduce lara to jor-el in the fortress.

update soon please
Jeremy Shane chapter 15 . 12/22/2009
good chapter
Jeremy Shane chapter 16 . 12/22/2009
good chapter & more please
Jeremy Shane chapter 14 . 12/14/2009
good chapter & more please
Chlollie4eva chapter 14 . 12/14/2009
yeah. that was so sweet. cant wait for more. will clark and lana take lara up to the fortress so jor-el can meet her?

update soon please
Jeremy Shane chapter 13 . 12/5/2009
good chapter & more please

Please don't let the baby Die, I'm already dealing with the death of my Bird, no more death's
Jeremy Shane chapter 12 . 11/30/2009
good chapter & more please
Jeremy Shane chapter 10 . 11/23/2009
good chapter & more please
Jeremy Shane chapter 11 . 11/23/2009
good chapter & more please
Jeremy Shane chapter 9 . 11/21/2009
good chapter & more please

I Hope Their's a Happy Ending & Land Doesn't Lose her Baby & Mr. Kent Doesn't Die & you Know
Jeremy Shane chapter 8 . 11/21/2009
good chapter & more please

I'm sure the kid will be normal, since at the Time Clark was Human, Please don't let Lana lose the Kid, I want a Happy Ending, please
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