|Reviews for Naruto: New Genesis|
| Josh2750 chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
its a good story, you should carry it on.
| ShiroFlake chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Good beginning !
Please hurry up with next chapter.
| Stormraven chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
Love the chapter! Nice plot idea and seeing how its unfolding. One thing, make sure your time word-usage is consistent. The Yondaime WAS the greatest Hokage, and so on. Otherwise, good job and can hardly wait for the next chapter.
| nirvana12 chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
love the story cant wait to see what happens
| Kyuubi-Sama chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
Good story so far, I'm looking forward to reading more.
| TheWillofFire chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
I like the story so far, especially introducing jiraiya early to a younger naruto. The only problem is that perhaps their relationship is developinp a little fast, maybe thats just me.
| sasunaru2themax chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
brilliant. Really good first fanfic, i loved it :)
Keep updating. _
| shyguy1818 chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
| Dark Prime0 chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
how old is naruto, if he's yonger then his speaking is to mature, (even 4-5, bc he's not in the academy yet) hell for a small child your making him sound like 13-15
your interactons between chacters moves to fast, almost like it's rushed, except between mizuki/ami & ami/naruto (can almost imagine them saying thoes thigs to each other)
good chapter length
not meny mistakes that i could see
not saying everything has to go by cannon (ages, attitude, other nosence), but should still make it bealvable
well that's it, can't think of anything else that poped out at me while reading
update soon, and remember everything up above is my opinion on what needs to be fixed
| DraGooNia chapter 1 . 11/3/2009