|Reviews for A Woman Scorned|
| TheSpoiltOne chapter 2 . 11/5/2009
Wow! that is fantastic... I am really enjoying it..
I will PM you...
| TheSpoiltOne chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
wow that is a great start!
has me wanting more!
| vickitori303 chapter 2 . 11/5/2009
I think you are off to a good start with this first chapter and the prologue. I wouldn't mind seeing more of Bella's emotions and thoughts, but you did add a little more of that towards the end of the chapter.
I thought Bella held it together pretty well when she saw Edward and Tanya. I would have been hyperventilating and getting all dizzy if I was put in that position then I'd get pissed like she did. It's nice to see a strong Bella; I kind of thought she'd be a little more reserve since she was giddy about fulfilling Edward's fantasy for his birthday. I love how she played Edward though. I am interested in seeing Edward's thoughts.
| vickitori303 chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
From the sounds of it...even though he hurt her 3 years ago, she still has feelings for him? And based on his reaction to seeing her they never really got closure? I'm mean she kind of did since she wrote a fictional book about the incident.
My interest is peaked by the prologue.
| tinyminnie chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
i love it
i wana know wat happend wit him and tanya afta bella left him
also cn she be wit jasper wen they meet up agian
i love him
| pcirish chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
cant believe edward cheated on her but loved how bella handled it. Update soon cant wait to see what happens next
| GabzR chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
wow i would kill him. I hope she gets him good in court also i hope when they do see eachother again he is not with tanya maybe bella could be with someone
| Jasper's temptress chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
OMJ! How messed up is that? I hope she gets her everything in court. I know how it feels to be cheated on.
| 4natelaft chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
OMg I loved it...Amazing...what A bitch TAnya and A dick Edward...I hope she gets him good in court
| Ethyl The Pirates Daughter chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
I can't wait to see where this is going. I love how she left him hanging.
I don't know about the rest of your readers, but I might just not be classy enough to avoid sending illicit materials to an ex's place of work.
| xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxv chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
im in shock
| zemmeline chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
Wow! It's great! I love these kinds of stories, but this is by far my favorite. Why? Because it's pretty well-written! Lol, you're doing great! Update soon.
| gg2full chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
Man this story is awesome! I want Bella to beat his ass but still want them together! I'm a sucker for Bella and Edward. I cant wait till the next chapter pls post soon
| vampiregurl chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
oh my god you updated. i've been dying to know what happen. it's making me anxious.
if it was a one night stand maybe it could be forgiven. but they still kept on doing it which means both of them did not regret it. worse he might have love her. what wife wanted to hear that? as for her best friend, wow she really is a slut and backstabbing bitch. how could she betray bella? how could both of them betray bella? if i were bella i don't know what to do. kill myself? haha just kidding. why would i do that for them? hopefully after the divorce she find some peace and new friends that she could depend on.
| snjez chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
why oh why does little eddie boy have to be a slut! and with tanya of all people? its just so sad! but good chapter!