There are flaws but I think you made something true to your vision. It was a fun read.

Terrifyingly funny, an exceptional chapter.

Because this particular fanfic rickrolled me, I'm obligated to give a negative review. Got rickrolled, not recommended.

LMAOOO Shinji has fucking lost it

Wow! I just... loved it! You're an incredible writer cause this story was pure perfection.

How the hell did Seele come back into power? How are nations still a thing post 3rd impact? If the 2nd impact through the world into chaos by killing 2-3 billion people, you'd bet all semblance of post-modern civilization would be fragile AT BEST. Why is is NERV even taking orders from the committee that ordered their death sentence to enact their instrumentality plans?

Was, everyone forced out of instrumentality or do others still lay within the Black Moon? How did Shinji go from Japan to Germany when, like I said, all of humanity was turned into goo and brought back seemingly at random and so quickly?

This is a prety good fic. It is dedinetly worth the read, if you are looking for a post Third Impact fic.

Spoilers Ahead.
Altough it has some very serious flaws, especialy at the end. You clearly rushed the ending. Ziz's character isn't used enough. When she talked about Shinji having to fight the fallen and Fuyutsuki, I expected her to at least try doing something against them.

The other flaw are the side characters (with the expection of the SELEE guy) they are there for just sceenery. Nothing interesting is going on with them. But I have to admit that you have handeld the 2 main characters well. The story and the AU created were prety good aswell. I think these 3 things make it worth to read this story.

The best Eva Fanfic on this in my opinion. You really did an amazing job with this one.

A really good story. Really recommend!

Great story.

Real-life rickrolling... so beautiful.

Just read this now. What an amazing ride I was taken on. Loved every minute of this story.

Pretty damn good. I liked your proposal of Shinji leaving after 3I. Your characterization was good, but not particularly deep. The battles were quite well written and the pacing was overall very good. Your prose is surprisingly good for a non-native speaker (such as myself), I wouldn't even had noticed that if you didn't state it in your A/Ns. But I can't say there is anything really groundbreaking in this fic. Still, it's very solid work.

dat alternate ending... Heck, why isn't this canon? This is a wonderful piece!

Boring really. Shinji is still pathetic as ever.