Reviews for Master Race
Camilla10 chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Apart from his still loving his family, Edward is a real bastard, so far, first spiralling down to traditional vampire behavior and now being taken with Joham ideas. Ghastly. I would like to see him totally beaten and repented.

But the story is good and well written. i had missed it previously and have gotten to it only now. I found it among the favorites of a reader that favored one of my story, which is the only way to find good ones here.
turquoise1581 chapter 13 . 5/27/2010
Okay Edward seems like a creepy prev sexual asshaulting Bella during her sleep!
turquoise1581 chapter 6 . 5/26/2010
Good for Bella to tell Edward off the way she did. I'm glad that she back down to him.
turquoise1581 chapter 5 . 5/26/2010
Poor Bella. To just be used to have a baby and then thrown out like trash. Edward's such a prick.
turquoise1581 chapter 2 . 5/25/2010
So,Bella went to high school with the Cullen's, but not Edward?
turquoise1581 chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
Edward not a virgin vampire? That's just weird to me. Anyhow, the story is pretty interesting so far.
MEL24FAN chapter 25 . 5/24/2010
Loved the epi. I totally guessed that Nahuel was going to propose to Liz. So cute.
MEL24FAN chapter 24 . 5/24/2010
I love Charlie with Liz almost as much as Edward with her. So cute. I'm glad E/B are finally happy. It warms my heart. I like that they are taking Carlisle's name as well.
MEL24FAN chapter 23 . 5/24/2010
Aww I'm glad that Bella still gets to have Charlie in her life and that he is accepting of her and the Cullens. I love the scenes with Edward and the baby. I am a sucker for daddyward.
MEL24FAN chapter 22 . 5/24/2010
So I'm guessing it was Bella out in the woods listening to Carlisle and Edward. I think Edward has redeemed himself.
MEL24FAN chapter 20 . 5/24/2010
Well it's about time Edward.
MEL24FAN chapter 19 . 5/23/2010
I want Edward to tell Bella he loves her.
MEL24FAN chapter 17 . 5/23/2010
Let the good times roll.
MEL24FAN chapter 16 . 5/23/2010
A little late for second thoughts Edward.
MEL24FAN chapter 15 . 5/23/2010
I guess it's progress that Edward is making provisions to save Bella. Maybe his feelings will start to change for Bella once they've had sex.
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