Reviews for Master Race
MEL24FAN chapter 20 . 5/24/2010
Well it's about time Edward.
MEL24FAN chapter 19 . 5/23/2010
I want Edward to tell Bella he loves her.
MEL24FAN chapter 17 . 5/23/2010
Let the good times roll.
MEL24FAN chapter 16 . 5/23/2010
A little late for second thoughts Edward.
MEL24FAN chapter 15 . 5/23/2010
I guess it's progress that Edward is making provisions to save Bella. Maybe his feelings will start to change for Bella once they've had sex.
MEL24FAN chapter 14 . 5/23/2010
I think Bella will give in on this trip.
MEL24FAN chapter 12 . 5/23/2010
It's sad that Bella has genuine feelings for Edward but he only still sees her as an object. Just a vessel to carry his child.
MEL24FAN chapter 11 . 5/23/2010
That was a nice date. Even though Edward still only has one agenda I have faith that something will change his view on wanting a mate.
MEL24FAN chapter 10 . 5/23/2010
Oooh a hickey from Edward, much better than a Hallmark card. He stole her book? I don't think Bella is that easily distracted Edward.
MEL24FAN chapter 9 . 5/23/2010
I'm excited to see Bella's reaction when she finds out about Edward & the Cullens.
MEL24FAN chapter 7 . 5/23/2010
E was much better this chapter but still a little pushy for a second date.
MEL24FAN chapter 6 . 5/23/2010
Yeah Edward was pretty much a douche in this chapter but he hasn't scared me away yet.
MEL24FAN chapter 5 . 5/23/2010
Edward seems pretty set in his decision. Curious to how this will all play out.
MEL24FAN chapter 4 . 5/23/2010
So you said I would like Jacob more than Edward. Sorry still not feeling it. lol. I wouldn't think that Bella would put up with Jake's constant presence without more answers than he is giving her. I like to see Edward antagonize Jake. Hopefully there'll be more to come.
MEL24FAN chapter 3 . 5/22/2010
Really enjoying the story so far.
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