Reviews for Master Race
thelittlegerman chapter 2 . 11/21/2013
What has Alice seen?
thelittlegerman chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
This sounds very intriguing. And it has a lot of potential to go down south later on.
hikingurl chapter 25 . 9/18/2013
Followed some recommendations and found this story. So glad I did. Great story, great job. Thank you
Sammieanne chapter 21 . 8/21/2013
This is a fine story, you are indeed a wonderful story teller. There're mates, what is there to forgive. Edward was so young when he was turned, although he's one hundred and eight years old he's young and stupid.
sammieanne chapter 19 . 8/21/2013
Thanks for writing that imprinting mess directed at someone else, it should never have been Edward's child. You go girl, take care.
sammieanne chapter 8 . 8/21/2013
There seems to be no getting down to the real knitty gritty with this familiar story. What's up or I can't keep up, the story touches on every thing, but lands on nothing, oh well, maybe later, I'll keep reading.
sammieanne chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
I just hate Jacob, but I guess he's needed for drama.
sammieanne chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Different, yet still twilight and crew. You're good and your mind is intriguing ,oh well, lets read on.
1853kaz chapter 25 . 8/20/2013
Review, review, review! Thanks for sharing. I secretly enjoyed the naughty Edward in the beginning, knowing he would eventually redeem himself. It was a treat! :)
1853kaz chapter 24 . 8/19/2013
I've enjoyed it! Gotta say, rare for me, but I probably would have let him suffer a little longer! :)
1853kaz chapter 18 . 8/18/2013
Poor girl, hate to see her so low. She needs her fighting spirit to deal with this clueless dude, and the situation he's landed them in :)
1853kaz chapter 17 . 8/18/2013
Poor Bella. I can't imagine she's going to take this lightly :)
1853kaz chapter 16 . 8/18/2013
Holy cow, now you've done it, Edward! :)
1853kaz chapter 14 . 8/18/2013
No guesses, I'll let you tell me. I'm enjoying the ride! :)
1853kaz chapter 12 . 8/17/2013
Will of iron, Bella. Come on, hold out, remember to ask questions even if your brain is going to mush :)
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