|Reviews for The Undead|
| may96 chapter 9 . 7/15/2011
Perhaps Bella should get to know everyone, and slowly remember her past by doing things that trigger memories. And what if there was a new treaty made? and Bella could tell Alice her Past? Just some ideas. I hope you keep writing this story!
| darkbutterfly2011 chapter 7 . 5/2/2011
keep going please im kinda liking it its different so please keep going
| PamelaL7504 chapter 7 . 4/18/2011
Omg pleeeeeaaaaassssssseeeeee continue I was really liking the story and I want to see what happens with Bella and Edward. I would happily beg for more if you want.
| Daddys little crazy bitch chapter 7 . 4/16/2011
plz carry on
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz
| Iwannabeamarauder2010 chapter 7 . 4/16/2011
i would really love for you to carry this story on its great!
| Princess Mishawaka chapter 7 . 4/16/2011
Start over. You are a very good writer and your subject is interesting. You just got off track. Don't give up. Start over.
| Elena0017 chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
LOVE THIS CHAPTER. ARE U PLANNIN TO WRITE MORE CHAPTERS?
| Visum Luna chapter 5 . 7/10/2010
this is a really good story and good plot too
| KeyKeysagalover4eva chapter 5 . 7/8/2010
ohh snap its Jacob isnt it!
| MarveyTibbsMcGarrettWilliams chapter 5 . 4/19/2010
i luv it!
| BokuWaHime chapter 5 . 4/5/2010
hmm... the visions seemed kinda... jerky...
I like it though!
| Black Eyed Hawk chapter 5 . 4/5/2010
Heyy great story please update
| Navygirl14 chapter 5 . 4/5/2010
Oh she has to remember Jake..come on Bella remember..you've hurt Jake enough...just remember..maybe you can friends again.
| Ms. Kaylea chapter 5 . 4/5/2010
OMG! Great story! Please update soon!
| Navygirl14 chapter 4 . 12/4/2009
AW! They kissed...I am glad she is remembering and wants to know Edward..but will James do?