|Reviews for Lines|
| Jasper'sDarlinBunny chapter 14 . 10/23/2016
This is not the first time I am reading this story and it won't be the last because I love it! I found the April Fools contractions hilarious because my mom said I did that to her when she was pregnant. She went into false labor and didn't give birth until the 28th. She calls it my best April Fools joke ever.
| nhrc chapter 5 . 9/12/2016
This is the first time I truly Mourns that impossible to show facial expressions on coments. The Aimog'im are pale shadow.
I wish you could see me while I read this phenomenal love making scene while I listening to the song .
It feel sacred to me.
it was hard to sleep after because I was emotionally overloaded.
If it was possible my comment would be hug you tight while mumble "thank you" over and over again.
| nhrc chapter 3 . 9/12/2016
So pleasant the intimate moments of Optimus and Mikaela. They are do emotional. My eyes flickered with pleasure while reading.
| Jasper'sDarlinBunny chapter 16 . 7/28/2016
It was SO beautiful! T.T I'm so sad that it's over but I loved it!
| RachelBarbraBerry chapter 16 . 7/23/2016
| Little Kunai chapter 15 . 11/27/2015
I am so loving this story
| Little Kunai chapter 14 . 11/27/2015
Yeah labor sucks hard-core. She's taking it awful well
| Little Kunai chapter 13 . 11/27/2015
That was unexpected
| Little Kunai chapter 9 . 11/27/2015
This made me grin
| Little Kunai chapter 5 . 11/27/2015
Beautiful lemon and what happened at the end?
| Kamen Rider Type Miracle chapter 11 . 3/13/2015
D...Did magnus Rick Roll Shockwave? *Dies from the hilarirty*
| twibe chapter 2 . 8/7/2014
So, do you have a story for all the things that happened that they are talking about? And, seriously, Optimus, gay? And with Megatron,,, never saw that coming...
| Dragonrider10 chapter 16 . 7/6/2014
This story was so cute! Loved Elita and nearly cried at how Optimus held her after Mikaela gave birth to her!
| Dragonrider10 chapter 3 . 7/5/2014
The part that made me laugh the hardest was picturing Optimus with all the contents of the shopping bags spilled on him... oh my Primus!
| Katie Havok chapter 12 . 6/22/2014
I just have to review here and say: I love love LOVE that you mentioned cloth diapers in this! My crunchy little heart warbled, especially since I used cloth on my son for three years and enjoyed every moment of it. Strange but true! :)