Reviews for Brand of Skin
Gubefan1980 chapter 1 . 4/8/2016
OK here I am again loved it second time around. Forgot about Jasper wearing Edward's shirt. Still hoping for a seque . Sigh very sweet though very smexy story glad Jasper stayed, Carlisle too creepy for words
Gubefan1980 chapter 1 . 10/30/2015
That was nice sweet and poignant. Jasper was so kind to him. Actually a sequel would be nice. Hint hint like Edward realizing he really a top and they date and fall in love. Yeah I'm all about HEA and it would be nice for Jasper to be the older one for a change. You could have Edward realize he also had a hard time lol getting it up because he really is a top. There I wrote your sequel for you. He he.
joice84 chapter 1 . 6/28/2014
hi i just find your story and i loved is so hot! ! ; D
Rita01tx chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
Oh, my! A lesson learned for anyone thinkin' it would be a quick, EASY way to earn a few bucks...NOT!
I'm pleased Edward quickly decided this was not somethin' he ever wanted to do again LOL!
And I'm glad Jasper had a "fuck it" moment and asked Edward to hang out or somethin', as if Edward would tell him "no!"
Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
I love your Cuteward. He's super fucking cute.

I'm somewhere between begging for more and being happy with not ever getting to the 'conflict' section of the story.
Peelmeagrapenyc chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Very real, very good.
CentauRita chapter 1 . 7/20/2013

Glad you posted, 'Brand of Skin'

Jasper was a kind coach to Edward, for their mutual benefit.

Thanks for sharing.
Soulmate Ficwriter chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Loved this! I know it's been a while, but any chance of a second chapter of these two dating and getting a HEA?
sue273 chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Poor Edward! Lucky for him Jasper was so considerate. I'm sure this has happened to many 'models'!
shewoolf chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
I hope that you decide to add a couple more chapters to this... it's really good. And I enjoyed it immensely!
HeatherAbdelrahman chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
This was HOTT! I'd love to read a follow up... maybe reading about Jasper actually calling Edward... and the start of a relationship of sorts. hmmm I can picture lots of lemons :)
Leona Bowman chapter 1 . 8/17/2011

it was great.. You left it up to us the reads to go where no man has gone before..

In my mind they do meet up and jasper quites doing porn too. they become one.. haha.. I know I have great imagination...

3 Leona :)
Snappher chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
I'm biting my lip and smiling and grimacing...POOR POOR EDWARD! No hard on? performance anxiety? liking Jasper? god, it's a fucking greek tragedy/comedy all in one fanfic! Seriously, how do these people DO this? There is NO fucking way I could strut around naked in front of a bunch of people, even if I were SUPER hot - and fucking? them zooming in on my hookah? GAH! My dick just fell off, and I don't even HAVE one! I wanted to scream, "Run, Forest, RUN!" to Edward. Poor bastard. Even if Jasper called - and they dated - and fell in love - and married - and grew old together - I don't think that even once, in 60 years, Edward would ever be able to look him in the eye! :)

Thanks for a laugh! :)
colourfulchatterbox chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
I have recently got into slash...and I really liked this :)

I felt really sorry for Edward, I seriously just wanted to hug him :D

Carlisle sounds a bit like a pervert...kinda like he was leering at Edward the entire time...:P
twilightownsmyass chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
AMAZING o/s hun! im new to slash and how you wrote this felt so real! xxxx
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