Reviews for The Whole Picture
vampire messenger chapter 21 . 4/28/2011
alice pulled an edward didn't see that one coming. i have to ask are you going to finish this story or are you going to let it go. i personally hope that you choose to finih it seeing as it is an awesome story u doand you are an awesome writer with a lot of skill and imagination behind the computer. if you do decide to continue with this story please update soon.
lynettecullen chapter 21 . 9/8/2010
Damn.

I can't wait for the next update.
lynettecullen chapter 20 . 9/8/2010
Damn.

She pulled an Edward.
lynettecullen chapter 19 . 9/8/2010
I hope that Alice can explain it well.
lynettecullen chapter 18 . 9/8/2010
Well damn.

I hope that Alice doesn't pull an Edward.
lynettecullen chapter 17 . 9/8/2010
I hope that they don't get caught up.
lynettecullen chapter 16 . 9/8/2010
That was a VERY nice lemon.
lynettecullen chapter 15 . 9/8/2010
I'm glad that Bella isn't confused on the matter.
lynettecullen chapter 14 . 9/8/2010
I can see no way to fix the situation.

It seems as though Alice is fucked.
lynettecullen chapter 13 . 9/8/2010
I liked the goodbye kiss.

It was the shit.
lynettecullen chapter 12 . 9/8/2010
Yay!

Alice can hotwire!
lynettecullen chapter 11 . 9/8/2010
Damn.

Edward's drama queen ass gets on my nerves.
lynettecullen chapter 10 . 9/8/2010
Damn.

That was getting steamy.

I really liked how the first kiss turned out.
lynettecullen chapter 9 . 9/8/2010
I'm glad that Bella heard that.
lynettecullen chapter 8 . 9/8/2010
Yeeeeep.

Alice is THE best!
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