Reviews for Underestimated Fate
ddgorgeous chapter 11 . 10/12/2016
This story was written several years ago, but I've just had an opportunity to read it! Wow, what an amazing and emotional journey! I loved the style in which it was written; poetic. drawing the reader along with you...feeling and experiencing everything with Derek and Penelope! Thank you for sharing your gifts and I will keep reading until I have read every one of your stories!
onetreefan chapter 11 . 7/28/2010
good story
LoveforPenandDerek chapter 11 . 12/21/2009
Beautiful ending!
LoveforPenandDerek chapter 10 . 12/21/2009
That was a very emotional and good chapter. Derek is the best!
LoveforPenandDerek chapter 9 . 12/21/2009
Fran was so great in this chapter!
LoveforPenandDerek chapter 8 . 12/21/2009
Very sad to see Derek suffering
LoveforPenandDerek chapter 7 . 12/21/2009
Very gut wrenching chapter
LoveforPenandDerek chapter 6 . 12/21/2009
A very dramatic chapter.
LoveforPenandDerek chapter 5 . 12/21/2009
The whole team needs to track down this Doug and send him straight to prison.

Loved Derek and Penelope's night together and her remark to him at work about his size.
LoveforPenandDerek chapter 4 . 12/21/2009
She needs to call the cops on this murderer.
LoveforPenandDerek chapter 3 . 12/21/2009
I liked Pen and Derek's first date. He treats her so well.
LoveforPenandDerek chapter 2 . 12/21/2009
I hope Derek can somehow put a hurting on this Doug before the story ends.
PinkAngel17 chapter 11 . 11/19/2009
Chapter eight was really good! Loved how worried poor Morgan was. It was a great addition!
emzypemzy chapter 11 . 11/19/2009
Great added chapter! You silly sausage ;P But once again: fabulous story! :))
Leigh59 chapter 11 . 11/18/2009
a happy ending. good job.
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