|Reviews for 20 Truths about Malcolm aka The Joker|
| Hawki chapter 1 . 3/1
“Hes desperation of having love his relationships.”
Sentence is off. Maybe “His desperation of having love ruins his relationships.”?
-“The first time he thinks of killing someone hes seven.”
Should be “he’s.”
-The Grangers, the Weasleys…Harry Potter’s in this now?
-“Mother’s should love their sons.”
Should be “Mothers.”
-So…psychopathic Malcolm seems to be a bit of a theme for you. To be honest, I can’t really see Malcolm making the transition to the Joker, as while the Joker is smart, it’s more in his ability to generate fear and chaos rather than him being a genius. Maybe the Riddler or Clock King?
Semantics aside, still works. Flows well enough, and it carries its undercurrent of horror well without ever going over the top.
| Marcus Absent chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
I've seen very little of Malcolm in the Middle, but what I know of fits pretty well with this.
Very good. Not only a frightening fic, but also a lesson on how dangerous improper childrearing can be (though most cases are probably not this extreme).
And the HP reference is funny, too.
| QueenRose44 chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
lol i this is the only malcomm in the middle / dark knight crossover so i just had to read it.
I really liked it and it totally works !
| TillyMe chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
| 2wingo chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
That is BRILLIANT! You should flesh this out into a longer fanfic!
| KHwhitelion chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
This is both horrifying and fascinating!
I wish you'd flesh it out into a longer fic!
Since the Joker's real name isn't revealed in the movie, this could work!