|Reviews for The Fourth Friend|
| sarahmichellegellarfan1 chapter 12 . 4/14/2013
Lee is a jerk!
| sarahmichellegellarfan1 chapter 8 . 4/14/2013
no, she's gotta be with Fred,
| sarahmichellegellarfan1 chapter 3 . 4/14/2013
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/18/2012
1. Your chapters are too short.
2. Your character is bad created.
3. You are aware that it's highly unlikely that both girls went to Hogwarts. Actually the books state, that it is highly uncommen. When I think about it, I don't really thing that it has ever happend before.
4. The story is cliché
5. Badly written and limited vocabulary (it says a lot, considering I'm from other country, and farily young. How old are you? Seven?)
| ToxicSoap04 chapter 5 . 8/5/2012
over here in England it's not the sorceres stone originally it's the philospheres stone but for some reason they changed it in the print over in America...just though i'd point that out.
| Learn to Spell chapter 9 . 8/4/2012
It's DAPHNE Granger, stick to canon when your sense of humor stinks.
| LeoDaLion chapter 27 . 7/26/2011
heh heh good job thinkin' about the part where hazel and fred were spying, BRILLIENT! (did i spell that right? i hate spelling) i love this story!
P.S. when you get to the 7th part let fred live! he doesnt deserve to die! :'( *sniff*
| LeoDaLion chapter 11 . 7/26/2011
HAHA! i love it! it would stink to have a boggart like that, i would die of embarassment. also i think that Hazel should of slapped draco when she had the chance. XP
| LeoDaLion chapter 7 . 7/26/2011
I like your truth or dare part! Haha! XD
| LeoDaLion chapter 2 . 7/26/2011
heh heh heh, niiiiccceee. I like it :). heee. everyone likes makeing harry a twin but not many people (that i know of)think of giveing Hermione a twin :) cool. you are SO going on MY favs list!
| xoxo SKY xoxo chapter 31 . 7/4/2011
loved your story! cant wait to read the sequel!
| Ashlee chapter 11 . 5/29/2011
Well its a good thing your whole story is already posted or ida had to kill you. I really hste cliff hangers
| Ashlee chapter 9 . 5/29/2011
HA! That was funny. Good thing you explained it or I would have never caught it. 5-28-11 7:53am
| Ashlee chapter 7 . 5/29/2011
Get off your knees. Your story is good, people myself included are just to lazy to review. I'll try to review every couple of chapters, hows that sound?
| Youngwriter16 chapter 30 . 4/30/2011
Okay... I'm going to be nice about this. But there were several things that bugged me... First, it's Quidditch. Azkaban. And... minute. I don't mind the occasional misspelling, but every time I saw minute... it was spelled wrong. It bugged me. A lot. I'd suggest reading over this story again, and using a spell checker when you do, and either re-post it, or replace the chapters. I normally don't finish reading a story when there is excessive misspellings.
Other than that, I actually enjoyed the story theme. It wasn't something I've seen before, it was different. And for that, I applaud you.