|Reviews for I'll Kill You Tomorrow, My Queen|
| Brandir chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
I don't usually enjoy violent sadistic stories but this one was an exception. Nice!
| TwiWritingsP chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
This was FANTASTIC. I think my favorite part was the butterfly bit and his reaction to it.
Wonderful, simply superb. Bravo.
| booknerd323 chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
Wow. I never expected that. It was pretty awesome. Great job.
| treena-ivy-carter chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
I WOULD READ IT IF IT WAS A STORY. This is good. u r awesomer
| NeverOkayIPromise chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
Im Shocked, i mean kinda ooc but its good,
i dont know if you should turn this into a story though,i mean i would deffineatly want to read more. but the ending just works the way it is, and seems...Right.
your one of my fav. authors(ilove_untouchable_)along with daddys little cannibal, and i would love if you wrote more...please?
| SillyGranade chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
I must admit I read some of the reviews before I read this.
And those people where complete wrong.
Edward is not out of his mind at all ever time he killed someone it seemed quite just. Ill admit it was slightly " bone chilling" but in the conditions he had every moral right to kill everyone with the exception of the waiter but that kid needed to learn not to ogle the costumers.
| sango77djr chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
That was completly AWESOME! Gotta say i love ur work.
| Kristenhn chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Oh my God... I've already read it so many times I don't think I could count it. And every time I do I feel shivers down my spine and I'm like 'O God, this is fantastic'.
I want to tell you this once again: you are a great author and this story is a confirmation of it. I hope one day you'll let me translate it because I'm looking forward to that moment! :)
| zenithoflife chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
i read it and chills went up my spine. You captured Edward's perspective as a sadistic murderer so amazingly that i got slightly freaked out! Especially since i was reading it at 12 alone!
thanks for writing! it really made my day!
| Sometime Around Midnight chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
Holy shit that was fucking amazing. You should have a whole mind to continue!
| colourfulchatterbox chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
I WOULD READ A FULL STORY. :)
This freaked me out, in the best way...I LOVED IT.
Would love to read more of this psychotic Edward :)
| eliza6801 chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
| Kabbima chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Good story, sick, twisted, creepy and totally out of character, but I still rather enjoyed it lol. Nice to read something that stretches the imagination a bit! Thanks for sharing!
| xXxDiANAxXx chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Wow that was amazing, i wasn't quite sure about this story at the beginning 'cause im usually not into these types of stories but yours was awesome! :D
I say you should continue it or at least write a couple of more chapters!
This was great, i loved it!
Evil Edward is hot!
| Adlih Siuol chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
Holy shit! That was fucking great! It was like getting a peek into a young Hannibal Lecter combined with Charles Manson turned into a hopefully Bonnie and Clyde type story. Oh Please make this into a full fledge story. I really enjoyed it. The rawness and grusomeness of it was refreshing and thrilling. Please, please, please continue the story.