|Reviews for Visiting the Past|
| Suzy Q chapter 1 . 8/13/2018
You really capture the essence of the characters and do an excellent job of recreating their speech patterns. I also love how you take an aired episode and seamlessly add another scene or two that really seems to complete the show.
In this episode, I always thought that Abby was so manipulative and she should have been punished instead of Tim. It was a perfect time for Gibbs to follow through on his, "I'd hate to start smacking you like I do DiNozzo, but it won't be on the head."
Instead, he took Tim's chair away. I'm glad that Tim gave Abby the spanking she had coming. I love a strong Timmy!
| Suzy Q chapter 1 . 8/13/2018
I discovered fan fiction about 6 months ago. I must say that your writing seems to be the truest to the characters. You really capture their speech patterns better than anyone else, at least in my opinion. I love that you take an actual episode and formulate an extra few scenes that seem to fit right in seamlessly.
I always thought that Gibbs should have punished Abby instead of Tim in this one. It was about time to pull out the "if I have to start smacking you like I do DiNozzo, it won't be on the head."
Well, he may not have followed through, but at least Tim did. She really did have that spanking coming. I like a strong Timmy!
| GiJane431 chapter 1 . 8/31/2015
This is very cute. Love it.
| special agent Ali chapter 1 . 4/7/2015
McAbby is my favorite pairing ever so this story makes me smile. I love how Timmy stops when he hears her crying, he's such a good guy. I swear I'd stop watching if Timmy died. I love Sean Murray so much.
Funny thing is the reason I got into NCIS was cuz I was bored the day Twisted Sister premiered. So I sat with my mom to watch and fell in love. Other funny part is I'm now huge into Pretty Little Liars and Troian is one of the liars.
| Gttttttttttt chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
NCIS is one of thses shows that has many spanking fics for some reasom loool.
anyway great job .you kept both into character .
Its so like Tim not force the spanking and let her agree to it on her own.
I guess consensual non-sexual spanking is kind your thing looool . I rarely see fics about it .
Anyway will written fic .
| Cumor chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Absolutely wonderful story. It fits the characters perfectly and is so well written. Along with others, I wish this is how that scene had been played out. Nice job.
| Anakin-Jason-Skywalker-Kenobi chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
Awwww! Very cute! I love Abby/Time pairings. :) Thanks for the wonderful story! -AJSK
| Fed up with this crap chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Just thought I'd comment I drove myself crazy looking for this story a while back over the summer. Read it on yahoo groups and thought I had read it here. Found it today by complete accident and still great.
| wandamarie chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
wow it was a good one thanks
| brickbyboringbrick24 chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
I LOVED THIS ONESHOT. AWESOME JOB ON THIS.
| Roxie-Lee chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
What a wonderful story. I have agree with everyone else that this is the way that this story should have gone. I can not wait to read more of your stories. Keep up the great work.
| NeverImpressed chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
Amazing! I could totally see Tim reacting this way- how you portrayed the characters was spot on! I'm looking forward to more stories. Post again soon.
| chelsea1234 chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
That is definitely how that episode should have ended. I loved it. Thankyou.:)
| SouthernBlossom chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
That was really cute! I absolutely loved it.
| NaughtyAngelBrat chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
Finally! Someone finally wrote what the correct ending of that episode should have been. As I told another author of another story, I think if Tim had put Abby over his knee at this time, they would have ended up together a long time ago. Thank you very much.