Reviews for The Little Veela that Could
Snow chapter 32 . 2/19
Well that was quite a trip. It dragged in one or two places but overall I'm happy with how it went. I am a bit curious about Bellatrix but... in the end she's unimportant.
Phillies2 chapter 32 . 2/18
It was interesting and i enjoyed reading it, good show
Phillies2 chapter 30 . 2/18
I think it would have been better to just invite Gabby to the house after school using imperious on Aimee. Too many portkeys used in kidnapping. Also how did Bellatrix and tom get into France?
Phillies2 chapter 27 . 2/18
I really just skimmed over the ginny scene, she was rather an annoying read. I figured they would try to save the longbottoms at some point, I just thought it be Gabby's tears instead of Blood magic
Phillies2 chapter 26 . 2/18
I say Oblivate Ginny, if I was Hermione I already would have just as Draco said. Also I think I'm getting a pet peeve of Harry not being able to be called Lord Potter or anything that isn't just Harry-grow up ghost Harry and deal with it
Phillies2 chapter 25 . 2/18
I really did not like this chapter for a lot of reasons, 1st Apolline forced herself to come? Gabby burned a whole town with thousands there. 2nd bringing Hermione, really-why does harry keep promising her things like not coming back to Britain? What is or could she do to him to? 3-Why did he let all his old friends come, what an idiot, I thought he wanted them safe. it should have been him and gabby. 4. Harry told Alain about the attack, wouldn't they reinforce the units protecting Hogwarts with an imminent threat? I just got really mad at all the dumb and idiotic decisions made this chapter
Phillies2 chapter 24 . 2/17
Shouldn't the twins have graduated last yr? or did they come back because Umbridge is gone? I don't understand what happened with Luna and snape at all either, but at least he is dead
Phillies2 chapter 23 . 2/17
I hate Snape so much in this, how could they let him become headmaster? He is worse than canon in this too. If Harry needed to threaten anyone it should have been Snape, Cedric could have handled Cho
Phillies2 chapter 18 . 2/17
I kinda wonder what happened to Remus? Did the twins flee Hogwarts already ?
Phillies2 chapter 15 . 2/17
I don't understand why Harry put himself at risk, I mean Debby went there himself, why not the house elfs to spy on everything. I also think this war should go smoothly, I mean its all of europe and the muggle side of Britain itself against the british magicals which you yourself said are screwed when it comes to defense and don't embrace technology or guns at all.
Phillies2 chapter 13 . 2/17
It is kinda weird that Hermione says her boyfriend is a dead ghost, even if it is Harry. I kinda want to see Jeanne stay
Phillies2 chapter 12 . 2/17
Why couldn't she have killed snape and Umbitch, then round it out with Tom torturing and killing Malfoy? That would have been amazing, but I'll take what I can get. Poor Amelia stuck with all these idiots
Snow chapter 6 . 2/16
I love your work, as I've read (most) of your published stories in whole or in part. Decided to comment regarding (2).

I think a misconception is Madame Maxime pronouncing it as 'dumbly - pause- door.' Instead, consider 'dumb-le-door' spoken fluidly. That is to say, enunciating the 'le' as 'lay' rather than 'dumb bull door'. Then try to put that in writing so that British children would get the right idea. Dumbly-dorr.
atlantis51 chapter 4 . 2/13
I hope that Voldemort is ALL kinds of messed up when he comes out of the cauldron!
Guest chapter 6 . 2/10
London Knight .
Heh a good story so far . A few mistakes but nothing major : Water Closet when no one in UK uses that term - Toilet , Bathroom or Bog is more likely .
Glad I found this Fic . LK out .
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