Reviews for The Little Veela that Could |
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![]() ![]() ![]() where is Ron to through all this I know he's definitely hurting |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay what is going on? lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow that's gruesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() An engaging and well written story. There were points when the plot became very dark but you always managed to bring the narrative back to the light. I liked all your characters very much particularly Luna, Gabby and Segolene. I also enjoyed how much Dumbledore misunderstood what was going on. Thank you for sharing your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow what a chapter. This was hard to read particularly the scenes around Hogsmead. I am enjoying this very different and well written story. Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such an imaginative and exciting story. There are so many interesting ideas and concepts. Thank you for sharing your writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() A interesting story. Thank you |
![]() ![]() This story is kind of melancholy, I think its a good story and different so will read it. Thanks for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such sad yet adorable story with Gabrielle, this is promising, I suppose Harry made something similar of an Horcrux but instead of being dark in taking a life to rip the soul he give it to her willingly with love, like Lily to her son. |
![]() ![]() ![]() did you just say "ginger" is a slur? |
![]() ![]() Yt |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wondered why I never finished this story This chapter sums it up, so much stupidity in one story |
![]() ![]() More huge script holes, seriously, every time the French realize that the English are entering their country and now they don't? what excuse are you going to make? none, and then you kill the bad guys quickly and painlessly while the good guys have to suffer before they die, i told you before and i'm saying it now, rot in hell |
![]() ![]() Snape should have suffered more before what you have done to him... a lot more |