Reviews for The Little Veela that Could
majere4 chapter 32 . 12/6
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"Still no ring, I see..." Luna commented, a hint of disapproval showing.

"He's asked," Hermione offered looking down at her unborn child, "believe me, he's asked
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It was an odd family they were building but it was full of love and happiness.
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By whose standard?

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"Harry and I don't shag on our trips, sister." Luna defended hotly.
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She thinks he's screwing Luna!? Why would she ever even consider such a thing? Has their relationship deteriorated to the point where she has forgotten who he is and now completely distrusts him?
What a nightmare! What happened? Why are they no longer together? Why did you write this story to this point and then have her turn into this pathetic excuse of a human being, she is nothing but a bundle of insecurity after everything that she and they have been through? And she has somehow stopped knowing him well enough to know that her rejections would gut him worse than anything the cruciatus could inflict.
He'll keep going. He'll keep loving her. He'll keep doing things to make the world better. But a little part of him would die every time she tossed his ardent and heartfelt proposal back in his face like some kind of rubbish.

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"I believe that their relationship is more spiritual and magical than it is physical. Really, their physical bodies just get in the way it seems."

In a world full of time dragons and giant acid spitting toads, neither Hermione nor Segolene could counter that.
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So there! Not that it matters, I guess her mind is made up

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"And you want me to accept 'insignificance'?" Hermione challenged.
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I find myself despairing. Such a wonderful story filled with solid, slow, romantic relationship building and you seem to be pissing on it for no particular reason other than just to be contrary.

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And they all lived happily ever after...

...unless they were bad guys; they would end up dieing in fire.
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*nods with satisfaction*
If only...

But wait...
I finished that nasty last bit and I'm left to wonder if Hermione was ever able to pull her head out of her arse? You gave not one hint to contrary but a lot of statements that she just will not (can not? Was she cursed?) believe that Harry loves her.
I made the comment about finding a hair, but I'm also finding myself dissatisfied on the whole because you've left the work unfinished - the last few feet to complete the bridge are undone and it is therefore useless to get home.

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The End of the End
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What a completely depressing and rather disgusting finish.
It's like finding a hair in the last bite of a wonderful meal.

I literally will not favorite this because this last chapter is a disaster and fully fails to be in keeping with the previous 30 chapters of consistent writing.
Did you come back to it after several years, hungover and pissed off at the world?
What a mess.
*closes last page and deletes bookmark with a heavy heart*
majere4 chapter 31 . 12/6
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She didn't want to send the wrong message and put the Wizarding World into a tizzy only to be called on it later. Obviously the reporting standards in Wizarding Britain had risen dramatically.
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Talk about understatement of the century!

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Smart as she was, Hermione did not posses half the flirting skills Segolene had, let alone Nathalie, and both have had their fair share of fun teasing Harry in the past year.
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Game, set and match to Harry. Hermione would randomly blush and smile throughout the rest of the day.
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*happy smile*
You do a wonderful job flirting with the idea of naughtiness and yet keeping them innocent, it's a wonderful balance.

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"'Mione. With the exception of those rare times when I went to Diagon Alley for school shopping or Christmas shopping, I've never had much money other than what I found on the sidewalk." Harry took in a breath, but not too big of one for he did not want the ex-Gryffindor to get into a proper rant. "I have you as my girlfriend. Gabby is my Angel. Luna, Fleur, Segolene and Aimee are like sisters. There are two men in this room I would be proud to call dad and two women whom I would love to call mum. Honestly, 'Mione, if this is being poor then I'm fine with it."
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*happy sigh*
So many authors start off with a really good concept of who Harry is but then he loses this focus along the way somehow. When terrible things have happened to him or he has been forced to become a hardened Warrior this makes sense but your Harry is linked to an angel and this makes it all the more important that you maintain the key part part of who he started as and what motivates him.
A thousand Kudos here.

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In the end, a motion to assemble an executive level inquiry was carried. With luck the bureaucrats might get around to opening the inquiry sometime in the next decade or so. Hermione, Harry and Gabby didn't win the day so much as they confused everyone about the issue.
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Sadly checking back in with reality here...

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The Boy Who Lived Again's girlfriend had the support of both the Angel of House Delacour and the Succubus of House Delacour.
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I mean... can't really argue with either title lol

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Those who were snogging, however, kept on snogging.
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Why? They are French, they are in France, they surely grew up using words that don't sound related to the use of cleaning products, so... why?

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Gabby preened. There were fighting over how awesome her Lord was. This was great!
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One of my favorite things about your story is how innocent and young you continue to present Gabrielle as. These little insights show us that she is a very sweet and innocent 9-year-old girl regardless of everything else going on in her life.
It is unusual to say the least for an author to be able to carry that off at the beginning, let alone throughout the tale.

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"But then he was in his thirties when he pulled that trick," Segolene gleefully poured petrol on the fire, "so our Harry is much more impressive pulling the same trick at less than half Jesus's age."
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You must cackle like a madman as you 'throw petrol on the fire'!

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"The other Veela would wonder why a boy was allowed on their island. It's a question we don't want to answer so the safest thing to do is prevent people from asking it."
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It is definitely worth acknowledging that they have to rely on their status as a cult for their own continued safety.

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"Oh, and we beat Voldemort too! He's gone, won't come back!"
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*falls down laughing*
This is just so perfectly Gabrielle!

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"An archangel gave it to me?" Gabby answered uncertainly.
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Another favorite moment, so easy to visualize her big blue eyes looking up all wide and innocent!

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Movie Night at the Delacour's. That could work.
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An excellent call out to an excellent fic, good job.
majere4 chapter 30 . 12/6
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Bellatrix stood still for a moment, staring into the flames. Then she pulled her left hand back from behind her back and uncrossed her fingers.
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Sick psycho bitch is very much confirmed!

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Tom Riddle never would have been able to win over the pureblood elite of Britain were it not for his winning personality and stagecraft.
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A very good point that is rarely brought to bear.

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Like a television hostess Bellatrix proudly held the obsidian dagger aloft, the edges of which were still slick with Gabrielle's blood.
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*blinks*
I could totally see this, like cinemagraphically, this just works..

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Harry Potter's spirit was ripped from the world of the living and thrown elsewhere.
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It's always a relief when the bad guy hasn't done his homework - especially when their reliance on their own ego and sense of "ultimate knowledge" leads to their downfall!

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If not for a scandalous encounter with the headstrong and virile Alexander Romanov, I would have stayed in that office. Baba Yaga may have suggested I end the relationship should I wish to keep my soul intact."

"Well..." Amelia didn't quite know how to respond to that. "I suppose Russia's loss is our gain, then."
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Nice job with a little revisionist history and a hell of a fun backstory for one of the Elder Stateswomen of the HP universe.

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"Apolline," Amelia consoled, "I am so very sorry to see you going through this. I swear on my magic that we will find the culprit and return your daughter to you alive and well."
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Crap! That's... reckless? bold? desperate?

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This whole affair was very different from his normal end of year life or death struggles with Voldemort.
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*snorts*
Well, he's not wrong, and it had been Very Entertaining!

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As the shade turned, perhaps to get one last taunt in before fleeing to plot and plan, Gabby swiftly pulled her substitute wand to bear on her target and barked one word.

Stop!

And he did stop.
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*grins*
Two things here, first of all I love that the typical villain flaw of monologuing was the ultimate mistake here!
Second, I don't think I ever gave you kudos for focusing on the value of intent in magic. This has always been a hallmark of Harry's magical power and you've done a great job expressing it with Gabrielle.

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Truly, Gabby felt sooooo much better. She could have done it. She would have done it. But she really, really didn't want to.
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Once again you fixed it so that little angels innocence is maintained. Well done!

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"Finite Incantatem." Harry called, wand once again held high.

There was a twisting in Riddle's form and then an earsplitting scream... and then it was over. Tom Riddle was no longer a threat to anyone alive.
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I love this. Canon used the disarming spell to end voldemort in a non-violent way - so Harry wasn't actually the one that took the devil's life - you follow beautifully and that vein here.
majere4 chapter 29 . 12/6
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Hand them off to Gabby and she'll have an island wide game of hide-and-seek running before you can say angel.
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I feel like this is The most obvious choice for the official angel initiation ceremony!

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"The first angels were maiar and Gabby has ascended to become a new maia.
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Perfect.
majere4 chapter 28 . 12/6
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Their mother chose him after being hit on in eighty-three languages in ten minutes. He even used period accurate come-on's in all of the the dead languages. Their mother reacted to his display of alpha nerd talent by sliding straight from her pole to his lap and riding him all the way to his hotel room.
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That right there gives hope to nerds everywhere!

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"Eden!" Segolene shouted. "The spiritual home to a race of fallen angels was named Eden!"
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You had to be either cringing in anticipation of the fallout for this little jab.

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"Sorry. I didn't think to ask what a maia was at the time. Must translate to angel or something."

Gabby spoke up. "What language is it?"

Harry's face pinked. "Didn't think to ask."
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Hah! Harry is definitely still Harry, angel lord or not!
majere4 chapter 27 . 12/5
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Luna began, "but I got more of Segolene than I wanted.
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"A bit more social… maybe a bit more fashion obsessed, I expect… a bit more in love with Fleur than before…"
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*sigh*
Well, her mother messed up and died so I am hopeful that this can be a lesson that she learns and grows from without such dire and permanent consequences.

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She wanted to go find all the people that thought she was a bad girl and she would angel-hug them. She would hug them all and then she'd dare them to say she was bad again. Who could say she was bad after an angel-hug? Nobody, that's who.
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Once again, I find no flaws in Little Angel's logic!
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The Angel Gabrielle cut a wide swath of utter rejuvenation through the weak and afflicted of St. Mungo's. None were spared. If you were ill when Gabrielle found you, she tried to heal you. More often than not, she succeeded. Even if she didn't, the angel-hugs were a big hit.
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I see no problem with this. Other than creating a demand for similar services... Worldwide...
majere4 chapter 26 . 12/5
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"So which one was it? The time dragon or the acid spitting toad?"
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Lmao!
What a way to wake up!

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please, Ginny, give Harry a chance to explain it himself before you go telling the world what you heard Voldemort say."
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Seriously? She seemed so intelligent and loyal... but, I guess she takes after bilius after all?

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How delightful, Potter and the mudblood caught up in blood magic. The very idea warmed Draco's heart.
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And maybe... if he worked it just right... Draco could take ownership of two puppets that not even Dumbledore or Voldemort could control.
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Should have gone with my gut and just gutted the twisted little ferret.

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I owe Harry... at the very least I can tell everyone what that monster's real name is."
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Ya Think!? Silly bitch.

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"Perfect timing, Hedwig." Luna stated.

Hedwig barked.

"Of course, my pretty friend," Luna replied airily, "An owl of your pedigree is never late. It is beneath you."
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Happy Luna moments are wonderful!

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"We will teach you not only how to unchain a soul from its anchors but how to return a soul to it's earthly container as well." Gabriel smiled warmly. "I believe you are ready to learn the blood magic art of resurrection."
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Why am I dreading this - given that tommy will probably be walking around in the original Harry Potter costume?
majere4 chapter 25 . 12/5
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Auror Dixon's last conscious act before she struck the ground was to pull a pin on her personal emergency anti-soul loss device. It was a grenade strapped into a bandolier across her chest and it went off seconds after she hit the ground. Mercifully, it also went off seconds before any dementors could get close enough to kiss her. Her spirit fled before they could take it.
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*cringes and shudders*
It is like the ultimate extension of the old spy movie trope with the cyanide tooth implant... only much much more terrifying and easily chosen over the alternative.

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"Sonorus." Draco intoned. "Headmaster Snape is dead!"

That got their attention.

"Go back to your dorms. This is a bad night to be about."
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Okay i admit it after his intervention for at least attempt through gonna and now this i hate to admit that i don't hate draco despise him yes but don't actively wish for his immediate public painful and slow evisceration.

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"I must admit I find this much more flattering than my old Hogwarts uniform." Hermione sniffed and preened a bit.
*grins*
I am happy that she is comfortable enough to be (more than) a little girly.

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"What are we here for then? We've already done trolls and a cerberus..."

Ron took up the torch, "...and a bloody great snake...
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And on and on they went and it started to feel like a particularly funny Monty Python sketch!

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"So, Harry... do you have a plan already or is that why I'm here?"
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Hah! She knows him so well!

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Harry was about to say that he really just wanted to go outside with Gabby, beat up the dementors and go home... but he suspected Hermione wouldn't be too impressed with the simple elegance of his plan.
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Simple, yes. Elegant... notsomuch lol

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"Something tells me your merry band would be more comfortable if I weren't a part of it." Draco smiled slyly. "Besides, someone has to warn the other students. I think I know a seventh Year or two who learned the Patronus.
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The activate is officially off my kiss-on-sight list.

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Dobby proudly handed over the mirror gloss elf spit-polished shaft. Harry Potter Sir's Missy 'Mione's Firebolt. Precious, it was.
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I do not squee.

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That thing's way too much broom for her."
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It is the true measure of the maturity of all the others involved that they didn't just beat bilius bloody for being himself.

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"Harry?" Hermione called in a deceptively smooth tone.

"Yes, love?"

"Race you to Myrtle?"
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I Freaking Love This!

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Harry lost. He lost a broom race. To Hermione. Worse yet, she was riding his very own be quite honest, the ghost was very proud of his witch and more than a little excited by her performance. There was a reason he fancied Cho before he died and it wasn't just that she was pretty. She was a seeker, a lover of flying like him. And now Hermione fit the same category, not that he didn't already love her for other things but a shared love of flying was just icing on the cake.
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You guess so many kudos for this i just can't even began to count them i had all but written off hermione as belonging to chrome and had only counted the ability to ride a broom as a reason to be more attractive to the elder seeker completely blind off how it would affect our young hero.

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I will take away your tears, Momma. I will steal them from you and you won't ever be sad ever again.
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This was kind of creepy... it felt for some reason like the Galadrielle's speech about possessing the One Ring lol

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They were bad and she would teach them a very big lesson. She would make the world a better place.
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*cheers involuntarily*

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All sound ceased save that of wind and wings... and the dull thud of dementor bits hitting the ground below.
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*cheers unrestrained and precise*

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"Boo!" Voldemort shouted, slamming one booted heel down on the stone at his feet. More than one of the students before him flinched back. "Pathetic..."
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What the actual hell did tommy grow a personality creepy and freaking weird but still use much more than the cardboard cutout that better than 50% of the fix bring out to die.

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"Unless you want these children to die, you will turn back!" Voldemort bellowed at the aurors to their rear.
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He didn't kill them. No. That would be too easy. Wanted to play with them as Harry and little Gabrielle watched helplessly, unable to do anything about it.
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Summabitch, your spit-polished is a scary mofo.

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The air shook as angelic power rang in the tone of a massive bell being struck. By the time her halo dissipated across the stone at her feet, Gabrielle was standing right back next to her mother again. She was back, and she brought Voldemort with her... or rather... she brought some of Voldemort back with her. His arms, his wand and the front half of his torso and legs to be specific.

Dark Lord Voldemort's body collapsed lifelessly in two different places at the same time.
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*mad and wild happy dancing! *

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"Why aren't you dead like a good bad guy would be?" A righteous Gabby demanded of the disembodied Tom Riddle.
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This is simultaneously ridiculously cute and imminently reasonable and i would like tommy to reconsider his position on the matter and just f'ing die so as to not upset the little angel.

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"I know your secret, Harry Potter. Blood magic made that girl your slave... though I am surprised that you knew enough of blood magic to catch yourself such a fine prize... perhaps this is your godfather's influence?"
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Dammit.
That's... Not Good.

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I don't remember reading any other stories where teleport magic was used as a direct attack instead of a support move
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Another Kudos in the bucket!
majere4 chapter 24 . 12/4
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Ginny came up to Harry. "Give us a kiss?"

Ginny offered her cheek and Harry promptly kissed it. As he withdrew, she held her hand up to where his spectral lips touched skin.

"Cold." She said quietly.

"Give me some time, Gin." Harry replied. "They say that good things come to those who wait."

"Do they?" She asked while making her way to the door. "I hope they're right."
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Ginny, too?
This has me partly confused and partly wondering all sorts of different possibilities...
Which further confuse me lol

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Apparently someone had figured out she was a girl. Pity he was too young to help her fulfill her oath to Sirius.
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Okay she might not be innocent enough to be an angel!

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Alas…The light didn't mean that she was free, per se, or even that Harry had escaped his bonds. Severus bit back the urge to look again. If he didn't directly observe it then it may not have happened yet.
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Shite! Shite shite shite!
Intelligent bad guys are the scariest kind!

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"I could just look into your mind... but then where is the fun in that?"

"I don't unders-"

"Crucio!" Snape roared.

Luna fell to the ground shrieking in pain.
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His death cannot come soon enough and it will never be as horrific as it should be.

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The universe itself reacted to Severus Snape's foolishness. At that precise point in space, time shifted and turned. The Killing Curse itself unraveled and a flaw in Existence reached out to connect with the man on the other side of that curse.
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Another excellent use of magic to do something unexpected!

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Harry resolved to find out where on Earth this artifact was and make sure that no mortal man had any access to this room for any reason. The sooner the better.
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Good luck with that... and I mean it!

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"This meeting is canceled! Return to your rooms!" Draco shouted.
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Things are getting tiny whiny twisty whisty!
I'm willing to acknowledge that i can appreciate the draco is being much more slithering in how he's going about being a little bag of shite.

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Gabby was about to pull the halo down to replace her home with Scotland when she stopped. Her Lord made a promise to a certain English girlfriend not long after his last big adventure... something about penciling her in for the next one.

Next stop, Beauxbatons! Toot tooooooot! Gabby chirped, hand on the imaginary whistle chord.
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*falls over laughing*

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"I'm sorry Headmistress Maxime!" Hermione shouted across the dining hall. "But I've been called away on family business. I'll come back as soon as I can!"
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That's... accurate.
It is worth pointing out that Hermione and Harry and company are living a wildly fantastical life even compared to their magical world compatriates. lol

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So many people spend chapter upon chapter desperately avoiding the deadly trap of paradox that I just had to run into one headlong without having the Earth explode as a result. I think it worked.
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It did! And it was hold another 'new to me' plot device. You are racking up quite the count on that category, kudos!
majere4 chapter 23 . 12/4
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Luna looked to Hermione. 'Lily Potter's Journal' was left unsaid but acknowledged. She turned back to Susan, looked the girl in the eyes and lied.
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They are getting really close. It's so cool to see Hermione be able to be a 'big sis'.

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"It is so very wonderful to have friends." Luna smiled that time. "I begin to wonder how I ever got along without them before."

Oh, dear. Harry couldn't leave her alone now.
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He's easily manipulated, but his heart cannot change without changing his fundamental character.

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"I don't want to be here. I have to be here." The troubled girl answered. "I can't say why, not in a way that you will understand or believe."
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Huh... got my brain spinning.

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The dead witch and her bathroom were a cornerstone in their relationship along with Doctor Harry Potter Sir.
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LMAO!

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"Exactly! You still did what was good and right at a time when you need not have. This is why you are of the light.
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Well reasoned!

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Lucifer, of course, couldn't resist the opportunity to tease. Depending on what kind of sister Gabby wanted, she either had to ask her parents or Harry to take the necessary steps. Gabby promised to work on her puppy dog eyes more to get somebody to agree to her demands.
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*snorts*
There's a conversation to keep in a pensieve for blackmail/ wedding embarrassment!

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"I think I am beginning to get a feel for being an angel." Luna called airily.
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She'd qualify.
majere4 chapter 22 . 12/2
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"I never liked him. He threw me in a lake and tried to take my name away."

"What she said." Harry thought Gabby summed it up rather well. Maybe it was a bit oversimplified but it was clear and honest.
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Neither of which describes dumbles which is fitting lol

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No one asked for more detail about Dumbledore's fate. They were all afraid he might actually provide it.
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Fashionable!

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Father's perfect world, his dream of a pure magical society, had quickly become a nightmare. Father was dead. Mother was... she nearly joined Father. Draco wondered if he would ever wake up.
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Poor little nazi... not.

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Draco hated the thought that Potter was a pawn. It meant that he couldn't truly place blame on the former Golden Boy of Gryffindor. Even worse, being Potters arch-nemesis counted for less if to fight him only meant that one was doing battle with a mere pawn.
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OK, I'll give him points for catching on... Finally!

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If Potter didn't help, one of only two things could happen. Draco would either die by the Dark Lord's wand or by Gabrielle's. Yes, damn it to Hell… he was frightfully scared of a nine year old girl.
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Dude is really starting to sound like he's gasped at least the basics.

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"I only got out of Hogwarts because Sirius died. His death called to me. Luckily they waited a few minutes to execute Nathalie… I wouldn't have been able to get to her in time if they lit both pyres together.
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I did wonder, thanks for clarifying.

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"I know exactly what you mean, son." Alain said with a small smile.

Harry blushed silver and looked away. He definitely heard Alain that time.
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Yay!

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Even for such wonderful news as Blacks death he could not smile until a grave had been found and swiftly desecrated.
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I hope this scumbag suffers. Every other villain that has died thus far has blinked and they were toast. Break the trend already!

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He hoped for the alarm to spread and he prayed for the good people of Scotland not twenty kilometers to the south.
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Shite shite shite!

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as the younger child, I must wait for you to do all those social things like dancing and dating and marriage before I am to have my turn.
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*blinks *
Lungs make happy.

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A soft breeze blew a few strands of hair across her face.

Harry liked making Hermione play with her hair. Wind was useful for that.
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Ata boy, I really like that he's using dreams like this! Not just passively, but interactively.

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I've lost faith in a great many things since I turned eleven. But you know what? I've never lost faith in you. I never will lose faith in you."
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I'm happy to be wrong about this, thank you!

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It would appear that Sirius Black's last letter was beginning to work its nefarious ways on dear Miss Granger.
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I would have thought that the Veela party where they talked openly and in detail about sex, satisfying and being satisfied, and so on would be much more informative than an old man being pervy LOL

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Don't tell Gabby that Heaven isn't real. She knows better. She goes there lots and lots.
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Super cute!

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Special squads of patronus casting aurors were being formed to hunt the bastards down, hopefully to push them offshore again.
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To what end? They'd just come back... and kill more people before they were found. This makes no sense. I would think that a solution to these demons would have been developed long ago.
majere4 chapter 21 . 12/2
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"Harry." Hermione called one step above a growl. "I suggest you say whatever it is before things get unpleasant for you."

Harry pulled at his collar a bit. That's right. Completely whipped.
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Well... yeah, that's our boy.

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"D-dipsy will stand on lit kitchen stove now if Young Master wishes."

Draco nodded curtly. His chances of getting through the night without some form of pain was almost nil. Dipsy could not be allowed to deliver such bad news without punishment.
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Yep draco's just a poor misunderstood... little piece of Nazi shite. Oops, I started off towing your ridiculous party line but I slipped back into the reality of what a waste of air consumption the malfoi line is.

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"You look different, Potter." The Bulgarian stared at the ghost intensely. "You get hair cut?"
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LMAO!
You pushed back Victor's visitation long enough that I was wondering what his interaction was going to be with Hermione. I am still wondering...

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Severus was one of his favorite success stories- a young man who saw the error of his ways and returned to the light knowing full well the price that must be paid for such reversals. If only young Harry had risen above his petty rivalries and accepted what Severus could teach him about life.
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Dude is completely freaking nutters. He is so out of touch with reality that he is just making shite up as he goes along and nodding to himself as though he had just rewritten reality with his bumbling musings.

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Perhaps if Harry Potter had lived beyond the Second Task, Albus could have ensured that Miss Granger was constantly under some threat or other. That would have kept Harry's protective nature finely honed
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That dirty friggin... gah!

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"Well..." Jeanne looked like she was trying to say the best possible thing but she was having trouble wording it just right. "I think... I've found that the truth is both more simple and more complicated than anyone could ever imagine. I'm sure you will understand. One day."
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Solid non answer!
I cannot say that I would wish that fate on anyone but Tommy... and yeah, toad, but it's hard to feel broken up over how things ended for Dumbledore given how he was willing to commit murder most foul.

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Well, if I follow the same logic path as some of my source material, then God did it. a magical world origin myth inspired by Tolkien. More from The Silmarillion
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Can't go wrong there!
majere4 chapter 20 . 12/2
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Gabby herself stayed in her angel body. It was warmer and it was fun and it came with its own flashlight.
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Love love love Gabrielle's attitude!

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"Wow! You're me! Wanna play?" Gabrielle with wet boots called up to herself.

"Ooo-kayyyyy!"Her clone shouted before the two began a very well matched game of tag.
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I super love Gabrielle's heart. But that would be a funny game to watch...
I mean, playing tag with a twin is one thing, but this... lol

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"It's okay, Harry." The twin called softly. "I know I'm not really her."

He caught her eyes with his. She may be a copy, but she was as close to the real thing as this world could make; and if the real Gabby so much as suspected Harry didn't really love her...

Harry knelt down before the Gabby that spoke out and pulled her into a deep hug, one that the real Gabby immediately joined from the outside.

"You see?" Gabby squeaked. "Harry's the best! He loves me and you're me so he loves you too! Isn't that right, Harry?"
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Solid reasoning that our hero backs up with actions. Gabby has no reasons to doubt and Harry will always be on guard to allay her fears.
And I may have choked up a little.

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you also gain immortality."

Harry tilted his head before checking to a pulse again. No. Still nothing. "No offense, but I think you got that bit wrong. I'm pretty sure I'm dead and not immortal."

"If certain steps are taken, this is a problem that can be resolved.
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Aha! More than one way to... un-ghost a cat?
I did enjoy Harry being snarky to an angel and one of the archangels at that!

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"Under more controlled conditions, you need not die to bind a second angel to you... or a third..."

Harry actually took a step back. Strange as it may seem, he felt like Lucifer was asking him to give her children.

"Are we absolutely sure you're one of the good guys?" Harry asked the grinning angel.
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...trippy doesn't scratch the surface!
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"Temple? What temple?" Emma asked, somewhat concerned that the littlest Delacour needed no time at all to come up with some adventure Emma's daughter could participate in.
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Smart woman :/
It sucks that they have to outright lie to her and it sucks more of that Gabby has to participate in deception. But, given her nature, there will be some things that need to be held secret from pretty much everybody so she had better get used to it I suppose.

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The source of those phantom noises floated out of her closet, jumped up onto the foot of her bed and began to lick itself.
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*blinks*
Well... huh.
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Well, I can definitely see how some religious zealots might have gotten their titties twisted at this point! Thankfully I'm still aware that I'm reading Fiction, and some pretty inventive and imaginative stuff at that. Well done!

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Luna held two fingers apart as a measure of distance. "I'd say she's about the size of a bean right now. What a delightful little pixie she'll be when we first meet her. She'll have her mum's eyes and hair, like there was any other possibility.
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Pretty heavy hunting here, the old mutt is going to be a daddy!

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Someone turned his engagement ring into a portkey.
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Dammit Sirius! When will you learn to pay attention? I have a terrible feeling you will not have the opportunity to learn from this experience

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Alain would be spending his nights in an adjacent bedroom until Harry was back in Gabrielle's home and in her dreams.
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Sounds like the old dog is in trouble and Alain is in the dog house!

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Horrible realization struck Sirius just as the screaming began. He wasn't the one getting cursed.
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Dammit Sirius, she's preggers! Shut your smart ass mouth for once!

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Hermione stopped for a moment to drink some orange juice and reflect on the fact that she's willing to invoke Jeanne's name again.
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Yeah, noticed a few of them doing that, very odd... but makes more sense than swearing by merlin...
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