|Reviews for As the Sun Rises|
| Natsuki D chapter 1 . 9/23/2014
I loved this one it was so sweet even though I'm not one for the romance type but I like this one. Though I'm crying cause I'm emotional. (Stupid emotions over running)
Keep writing good fanfics k ;)
| mei101 chapter 1 . 2/7/2014
TTTT it so sad
you said small instead of smile
| That One Under Your Bed chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
im going to cry 3':
| hanabimonai chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
This definitely brought a tear to my eye as the hardest thing for me to handle in romantic tales is if one has to live on without the other. Perhaps it sounds morbid, but I'm glad Allen could follow after his true love. :')
btw I also like the idea of their deaths both occurring at dawn. Strangely, I'm not sure why that is, but I just do.
One little typo: you have "small" in place of "smile" at one point:
"Then, just for a second, your lips twitched upwards, forming the first and last small I'd ever see on you."
Short and bittersweet! Thank you. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
I always thought that Yuu would by the vamp for some reason
ANd yes I did get teary eyed thanky very much *hands u a tearstained cooky*
| Eventideless chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
This... this... this story is so wonderful and sad! You've made me cry... twice. Nya, I hadn't seen vampire!Allen in a long while... Great job!
| Yurri-chan chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
I started crying and I still am... Wow this was... it was just too... Sorry I can't find the word to describe this story!
| Starisia the Shadow Demon chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
Teary-eyed? NO, I am not teary-eyed, I am all out CRYING! This was by far the saddest thing I've ever read, and deffinately one of, if not the, most beautiful.
I absolutely loved it, even if my heart is now no more than shattered shards on the ground.
| crimson-angel08 chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Yeah, I did have teary eyes, poor Allen and Yuu! :(((
| In a silent night chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
That was sad... There were tears and-
Kanda is going to kill his Bean Sprout when they get to heaven. For dying with out honor. Then he's going to give him a big kiss as the walk in the Pearly Gates.
| Badee Badaa Doo chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
It so cute and it made me tear up. I loved it *sniff*
| dazzledlovely chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Crying. Damn you. ;A;
| i-am-turk-fear-me chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Congratulations! You Have Made Me Cry...And That's a hard thing to do.
Love The Fic! i is Faving!
| im watchin u chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
i found this fic so sweet i definately teared up esp at the part that kanda said allen's name and allen felt he didn't want to hear it if it was him sayin good bye ithink i like ur plot bunnies
| olivia-yuymaxwell chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
i got teary eyes u know! That so sad & touching, i was kinda hoping that allen would changed kanda as well,but may be that wouldn't what he wanted :( please make more sweet yullen ne!