Reviews for One Day, One Night, One Moment
Master-Of-Death-3 chapter 9 . 10/4/2014
very god story. i love it, made nme cry.
sammi louis chapter 9 . 7/15/2014
It was so cute and sad. I can't stop crying
gymgirl100 chapter 9 . 8/27/2011
interesting story. I enjoyed it but Albus killing himself was a bit obvious. Other then that, it was a well thought out story.
SonataEternal chapter 9 . 2/24/2011
amazing, wonderful story
KrazyKimmy chapter 9 . 7/20/2010
awwww, thats so sad but so sweet!


...But you redempt yourself with the sweet ending! XD

Have a virtual cookie *Gives* XD XD XD
Dream's Girl chapter 9 . 3/15/2010
I liked it very much. thanks for your stories.

See you(will be glad to see a new one)
imnotokaywiththerunning chapter 9 . 3/14/2010
Overall I think your story had a good plot line. I liked how you showed the pain of a person going through cancer treatment along with their loved ones. It would have been better if you had developed a couple of your ideas more than you did. Also I noticed quite a few spelling errors, most of which I think were just typos-easy to fix. Some of your sentences needed to be active rather than passive. For example: instead of "he was looking at her" you should write "he looked at her." Sometimes I think you really wanted to get a point across to your readers and may have overdone it a bit on your adjectives. Hope this helps you in the future! Good luck with your next story! :D
minerva's-kitten chapter 9 . 3/14/2010
*sniffs* So incredibly sad and yet...and yet so beautiful. Well done *applauds* well done my friend!
kelly21us chapter 9 . 3/14/2010
ok...that was a very good ending to the story! I can't think of a way it would have been better!
minerva's-kitten chapter 8 . 3/8/2010
Gosh this is so sad. But so sweet and caring of Albus.
McGonagallFan chapter 8 . 3/7/2010
No! Don't kill Minerva! Please!
minerva's-kitten chapter 7 . 2/21/2010
Sad but I think I can understand that
sevy MMAD chapter 7 . 2/21/2010
I found the chapter very sad but marvelous. You can write very well.
sevy MMAD chapter 6 . 2/16/2010
Perfect chapter. I love it!
minerva's-kitten chapter 6 . 2/15/2010
Love it! Please more I'm hoping Min's okay in the end. We can't kill her it would kill Albus!
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