Reviews for Shin Pokegirl Evangelion
Guest chapter 3 . 5/22/2014
It's very confusing when new paragraphs aren't started when the speakers switch in dialogue.
guest chapter 7 . 6/23/2013
Realllllyyyyy LAME
Toby860 chapter 10 . 5/2/2013
A good story. I like it. Please write more of it.
Luke Dragneel chapter 10 . 1/15/2013
you keep ending things too quickly!
Luke Dragneel chapter 9 . 1/15/2013
you blame school yet have time for these long arse Author's Notes, I think your priorities are a little confused
Luke Dragneel chapter 8 . 1/15/2013
Too short, and your Author's Notes take up twice as much space as the story itself, wasteful.
Luke Dragneel chapter 7 . 1/15/2013
Overkill much? 50 would have done the trick
Zalgo chapter 8 . 7/19/2012
Giggity chapter 5 . 7/19/2012
Super Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann sour be able to defeat Jehuty easily.
Giggity chapter 4 . 7/19/2012
I imagined you having Media's laughter because he is the most evil person
a EVER. Also great story
ArkT chapter 6 . 10/31/2011
I love your story, but...

You waste 1/5th of your chapters on omake at the top. 2/5ths on pokegirl information that we could do without or less of. That leaves actual chapter in minority, I would suggest atleast shortening the omakes and pokegirl info.
lou2003us chapter 10 . 8/16/2011
please finish the series you started it's really good!
Taeniaea chapter 10 . 4/7/2011
cool story plz update it soon
koil163 chapter 8 . 8/16/2010
mango lol
koil163 chapter 4 . 8/16/2010
wtf? this is pokegelion (pokemon evangelion) dude, the only thing eva about this is shinji and rei are angels
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