|Reviews for Tracking Redemption|
| Turner1999 chapter 15 . 10/16
I absolutely loved this story (:
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/1/2016
This was beautiful! I hope there are more e/d parings out there, cause they're amazing together!
Thank you for sharing! It was beautifully written and it was a captivating story, read it in less than a day! Couldn't stop ;P
| DemeRain chapter 15 . 1/20/2016
I am in love with this story. It is a perfect departure from the second book. Thank you for giving life to all the Volturi characters that were previously so underutilized. Not only did I enjoy the story shoefreak37, I also found your colorful use of vocabulary delightful. Thanks for sharing.
And thank you for the image I now have stuck in my head due to the epilogue: “Vampire v.s. Shark” the crappy but highly entertaining made for T.V. scifi movie.
| Raven's twimom chapter 15 . 7/28/2015
I wasn't sure about this one when I started, but I enjoyed it very much. It was so well written I though I was on the boat with them. Thanks for sharing!
| Featherfreak chapter 15 . 1/28/2015
| I-Love-Trunks1 chapter 15 . 7/22/2014
Aw, that was so sweet.
I loved this story so much!
| rosa chapter 10 . 4/2/2014
love this pairing...love demetri...pleaz write more
| Guest chapter 15 . 10/23/2013
ok, so, I know its been a long time since u wrote this but I have a request for u that is if u are still writing at all. for some reason I have always loved the idea of Edward having an affair and ends up leaving Bella. I was wondering if maybe possibly u could write a story that takes place at the end of breaking dawn but Aro was interested in Edwards power more than Alices. Bellas shield doesn't work so Aro tells them that if they give up Edward they wont fight and since Edward doesn't want to see his family fight he agrees. Aro offers the rest of the Cullens to go with them but they don't have to actually work for them if they don't want to. they agree. Then Edward eventually falls for either Demitri or Caius (is that how u spell it?) either way I don't care I like both characters. I would write it myself but I don't have the patience or the writing skill that u obviously posses. Anyway I know u probably wont read this let alone actually make the story that was talking about but I am still keeping my fingers crossed. P.S. I asked u to write this because u are great at writing and u seem to plan the events in your stories perfectly:)
| Guest chapter 15 . 10/7/2013
| EdwardsMate4ever chapter 15 . 9/13/2013
Wow, this was such a wonderful story. Not a pairing that would usually pique my interest, but having read some of your other stories, I gave it a try. So glad I did. Your writing continues to be original and entertaining. Thank you!
| KeegSlytherin chapter 15 . 9/16/2012
Hello! Well, I don't think I have enough words in my vast vocabulary to express how much I enjoyed reading your story. Yesterday, I was randomly looking for something that would be mildly interesting to read and thought: "Hey, let's see if there is something with Edward and Demetri together, it's something people seldom write about!". I was literally seduced from the first paragraph and it took all of my weekend to read the 15 chapters of this story, but not regrets! I really don't think I wasted my weekend with your story. On the contrary, I enjoyed it!
I don't know how much fanfictions I have been reading over the years (some thousands maybe), but I can safely say that yours was the best written and most entertaining I every got to read!
I think the moment I laughed the most was when Edward actually ASKS Demetri if he can rim his arse! (I mean, it is not something you usually ASK, you just do it. But I will put that on his absence of experience in anything sex).
I think the saddest moment for me in the story was when Edward is at the airport and tries to catch Demetri, thinking him gone to Athens (maybe I should put that on the music I was listening to while reading that part... "Hurt" by Christina Aguilera is a sad song. It was quite fitting with the story in a way!
I don't think I can say more about your story except that it really made my day (well my weekend, more accurately) and I will surely return to it someday when life gets boring
I wanted to post comments earlier on other chapters, but I told myself that a longer review once I read everything was a better alternative!
| wheather79 chapter 15 . 6/22/2012
Loved it! This is the first Edward/Demetri story that I've read and I truly enjoyed it. You are very talented and I look forward to reading more of your writing. xo
| Maxylicious chapter 12 . 4/22/2012
Good grief you're good! so glad they worked things out although i must say Edward is an IDIOT. if he pulls one more stunt like that im taking Demetri for myself...
| Maxylicious chapter 9 . 4/22/2012
Dude! that was awesome! and intense...
| Maxylicious chapter 4 . 4/21/2012
Just stopped to say i LOVE Demetri! he is so good for E right now. No offense to Bella fans, but im sooo glad you offed her in this fic. One of my main probs with her xter is that shes such a Debbie Downer. Couple that with E's constant brooding, and you've got a total drag. Good to see him with someone fun for a change, might help get that stick out of his butt!.