It is a ... strange story. Snape is very not-idealized except his toned body. It is a strangely realistic story - I havened read sth like this with a Snape who is not perfect in doing something and is weak in some aspects - lets see what happens next...

I enjoyed this chapter as well, I like the darker style and you are handling it very well. I am so glad that I did not have to wait for ages for another chapter as well, I do hope you keep up this pace :o)

Great job as usual!

/Caroline

i like it, please keep writing.

brilliant story, that last bit made me cry, please update soon, i can't wait to read more

Very well written indeed, and yes, that's one of the striking things about Snape - he's simultaneously fragile and dangerous, intensely vulnerable and tough as boiled leather, like a bird of prey or a fine-boned excitable horse that's likely to kick.

I so enjoyed the beginning of this story. I am very glad you put three chapters up at once, it surely sucked me in to it all at once. I really look forward to reading the continuation, and soon :o)

/Caroline

Definitely not what I expected. The story is interesting, although I don't really like graphic scenes (of course it is M :P). I'm curious to see what Snape does, because I feel like he has a plan or SOMETHING. I really want to find out how they get together :)

See you next update!

Maki-sama