Reviews for Demons
Bamacrush chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
Very nicely done.

Love your style of writing.

Would never have guessed this was your first story.

Hoping for more stories from you and soon.
Merandus chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
This is a fine piece of writing, especially for one so young.

I encourage you to keep writing.
madame.alexandra chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
*blinks of amazement* That was really, really good. It was so sad! I don't know if you're an X-men fan, but I applied to to Jean/Logan as well as Jenny/Jethro. I hope you write more stuff; you're very talented.
elflordsmistress chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
"Light seems to avoid his face, leaving only shadows that reflect his inner turmoil."

This a beautiful line. Well done for expressing so much through it!

Very nice first piece - I hope we see more from you.

ellie

xx
MissJayne chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
Loved it! Very beautiful writing.
la-the dreary puppett chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
Loved it!
SherryGabs chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
Aw, poor Jethro. Very nicely done!