|Reviews for Like a Fan Girl|
| crimsoneyes44 chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
aw... so nice.
Except I thought this would be 5 chapters. OOC? This was quite OOC. But in a nice way I suppose. Or a "sigh..." (fangirly) way.
Anyways- UPDATE OTHER COOL STUFF SOON!
| sootyxsnowpetal chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
Aw, that was a cute ending. Such relationships are always fun to read. Thanks!
| Imagination-Unleashed14 chapter 2 . 11/22/2009
loved it!it was awesome but are u making another chapter?it was just to great to imagine what would happen on my just to good of a writer.
| Eco Panda chapter 2 . 11/22/2009
"I'm an icon, Ruka, but I'm also sixteen"
AWESOME LINE. It just made sense. REALLY did.
Hope you update. SOON! :]
| Snow Sparkle chapter 2 . 11/17/2009
Wow. This had a different feel compared to your previous works. I remember checking twice if this was indeed yours. There weren't serious talk about wars, denials, death, consequences, etc. It's simple and quite a refreshing change. I'm glad though that one of the things that remained is the wit and humor. :D
“You’re not making it easy to admit defeat.”
His voice grew low as he bent closer. His breath was warm on her ear, making her shiver. “But I could make it worth it.”
He stopped in front of his door to search for his key. “You know how people think of the two of us as an icon? Like we ‘conquered all odds’ or ‘survived epic battles’ or crazy things like that? They make us sound like some old, romantic couple.”
“You’ve been reading the forums,” Ruka laughed.
| anitsirhc chapter 2 . 11/17/2009
haha...poor mikan and naughty natsume... ) i liked the flow of the story and the plot is unique. liked it so much! update as soon as you can and good luck! )
| JazzyCat chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
With the stereotype being sexy, scantily-clad women doing carwashes, I couldn't help but imagine Natsume in frayed Daisy dukes and a button-front shirt tied up above his belly button. It was amusing, until you imagine the manly muscles he's supposed to have. Then you can't understand what made you think of this. FOr serious...lol.
| bangag pa chapter 2 . 11/15/2009
lol natsume's so naughty! i like it hahaha... poor mikan... looking forward for the next chapter!
| xxkoffeexx chapter 2 . 11/15/2009
That last bit about Natsume admitting his insecurities? I swooned. Not once, but several times. You make him so hot that I feel jealous of Mikan! If only... if only there were more guys like that in the real world. :P
| Snow Sparkle chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
This story has a very distinct AU feel to me. A really shot chapter but I'm already on my way for chapter two so, I won't nag at you to make it longer. Really cute start. :D
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/14/2009
Duh, hang in there mikan...
don't lose XD
Love all your stories
Always original and different and not to mention barely make mistakes..
Keep it up! )
| shainingu etowa-ru chapter 2 . 11/14/2009
this is as great as chapter 1!
love it please continue whenever :)
P.S : You're doing great describing mikan's feelings! ;)
| ribbons-paws chapter 2 . 11/14/2009
Natsume just admitted that he indeed is... -ahem-. XD
| kuroren23 chapter 2 . 11/14/2009
*laughs* Can I keep you somewhere and have you these type of things just to remind me that THERE is something worth caring for in the entire world? Jeez,girl (i am of course assuming) you are a GODDESS. If i could have one ounce of whatever gift your Muses gave you I will die a happy person. Now for this particular work I commend the search for every possible scrap of OOCness in the known Hyuuga Universe.I would commemorate this thing in a book when its finished-I swear it. Now, if I may be so bold as to make an imposition: please write a scene with .I always picture Natsume as the type that would have really strong emotional ties with such an and promise me that Mikan will get him back for every inch of sinful torture he's making her go the work as always. The scene with the rueful admission of his intents-sweet. There's nothing more adorable than a proud little thing admitting that he's in need of some TLC.
| One Heartbeat chapter 2 . 11/14/2009
Jeez, I loved this too.
Natsume as a swimmer :)) I love the idea of it. I wanna see this dammit. :)
I like how Natsume doesn't deny that he's insecure, because that's how he's been feeling for both of the chapters right? Trying to get Mikan to admit to him that he's attractive. (Not very good at analyzing)
Ahaha, the forums? LOL to that. :) There are actually forums about that? Now that's scary. 8D
Update whenever you can :)