Reviews for Doubting Thomas |
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mountainelements chapter 1 . 12/3/2009 This is a really good but sad story. I have to wonder what will happen now. I hope that they can change things in the Wizarding World, but I'm also afraid that the war will destroy everything again. |
Azalie-Kauriu chapter 1 . 11/28/2009 completely love it! Luna is one of my favourite characters, and a what-if Tom has always been of interest! Im wondering if your ever going to do a sequel. Anyways this is definitely on my favourite list! |
tifany chapter 1 . 11/27/2009 wait, so Luna & voldie still create the death eaters or are they trying to make the world better? |
the new one chapter 1 . 11/23/2009 Amazing Story.. Brilliantly Written.. Great Character developement and narration.. And all this in just a one shot... Full fledged story please... |
PossiblyInsane213 chapter 1 . 11/21/2009 That was heart-breakingly good. |
theform chapter 1 . 11/8/2009 this was an exceptionally well written piece of work. i particularly enjoyed your development of the new riddle, both as a harry's successor yet still remaining riddle. and luna as mother is actually quite believable. and really, the changes to riddle are believable simply because it is Luna that is doing the child rearing. in fact, this story is so well written and developed, that i hope that there is a sequel in the works. this world that you have fashioned is simply too good for it not to be developed further. |
Web Walker chapter 1 . 11/8/2009 Very well written story with a nice flow to it. I hope to see more from you in the future! :-) Keep up the GREAT work! :-) |
paper crane chapter 1 . 11/7/2009 Absolutely breathtaking |
brigrove chapter 1 . 11/7/2009 this would be a great first chapter if it was the START of a story, but as a one-shot it's just depressing |
GirlWithNoName-Elli3 chapter 1 . 11/7/2009 That. Was. Awesome! it was really well written and set out and i loved it. definitely a different sort of timetravel fic ] will there be a follow-up or is it meant to stand alone? |
Kiracookies chapter 1 . 11/6/2009 I like this Luna, even if she is a bit obsessed with Harry. But then again it's to be expected. And this Tom is just what the wizarding world needs. Insert Mwahaha here. I'd love to see a sequel because it's clear that this is a story. Not a chapter. Pwease? *begs and makes puppy dog eyes and tugs on your heartstrings* |
grace1237 chapter 1 . 11/6/2009 Awesome! I like the way you've managed to distill an entire time-travel fic into one chapter. It' like watching a mini-series :) Nice writing and I like the sort of parallels between this new reality and the original. |