|Reviews for Simple and Clean|
| KingdomHearts Fanatic98473 chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Argh! Sora rape is not okay! But besides that it ended pretty well I guess, and I did like the story, so there is that. At least they ended up togethor in the end. Sora and Riku that is. haha
| bonjourmeadow chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
gah, make me bawl my eyes out, why don't you?
sora's just that perfect, isn't he? it fits him. you portrayed all the characters surprisingly well :)
| Bye Zexual chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
i love this story.
it makes me sad the part where Roxas and axel.
that's just.. sad.
i dont know what else to say.
i really enjoyed it.
i love how you wrote it.
and managed to insert the lyrics of the song.
i liike that song,
and YOU DO DESERVE REVIEWS ;D
i read this like, three days ago.
i just dont know what to comment/ review.
must favourite it.
i hope to read more stories from you.
i really enjoyed it.
that was cute, SoRiku.
i liked it.
| his last walk chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
I READ THIS. LAST WEEK.
BUT I COULDN'T REVIEW BECAUSE MY INTERNET WAS BEING BLOCKED BY A CERTAIN NETNANNY, BUT...who cares?
I get to review now.
YOU DESERVE MORE REVIEWS FOR THIS FANFIC.
...It was wonderful.
Like, even though Axel did it the wrong way, he did it for Roxas, and that's what I loved about this. Like, you didn't make him COMPLETELY bad, but ... you worked things out. And I really loved that. Then there was Sora and Riku, which was really sweet at the end. You worked the lyrics in perfectly too.
I really liked this D:
If you haven't noticed already.
I'm gonna favorite this.
You're talented. ;D
... Continue writing And good luck.
... AXEL AND ROXAS WERE SO CUTE. /end fangirling spaz.
I should have ended this review.
But I can't stop typing.
It was just amazing, and well, I bet you've heard that before. I'm gonna read this fanfic often, and though it makes me a little sad sometimes at the end, it's just...
| Dawn of Chaos chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
omg poor roxas. that's horrible. but the ending...priceless. i just loved it. looks like they'll just have to watch it together huh? keep up the good work!
| RecklessxDreamer chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
Gah, I just read this and the end still makes me cry. I think I cried the first time I read it through.
I love how you managed to fit in those lyrics. :wipes away tears:
This has got to be one of my favorite ones that you've written.
| lady Alexas chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
awesome i loved it
| Dance.Grimmjow.Dance chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
This was really, really, really good. It was sad/shocking/nerve wracking/adorable.
It's definately a favourite. :D