Fabulous story! I've read it 3 times. I loved how Sarah made her decision to go with Jarreth for good, and I loved the song to their daughter reminding me of the original film.

Thank you and keep writing..

Sheila

I loved this one! So creative, sad to lose a certain character but it worked out in the end and felt complete. I love when they have babies!

This was really enjoyable! I particularly liked the minor nods to Doctor Whoall I could think of was Nine shouting, “you’re gonna burn!” when the twins were gazing into the schism. Good to know my inner Doctor is calibrated correctly, lol.

That was only a minor part of the story, and I really enjoyed the whole thing. Nice job!

Ha so glad you used that song I was wondering if anyone used it in a fanfic great job

I knew it! When I first read the powers they had I jumped immediately to twilight and then when they got red eyes in this chapter I was like they're alec and jane!

I love how you write. This whole story was amazing. I just had to let you know that it's a crime it hasn't gotten more attention, because it's beautiful. I read this in one whole night. Didn't sleep a wink. No regrets.

So, David Bowie's dead...and a piece of my childhood (Labyrinth) went with him. Mom and I got together to watch Labyrinth yesterday, then I went home and read this again. Thanks for it, once again. Even though losing Bowie isn't like losing a family member or a pet, it is like losing a friend, and having your stories help. I notice there's a new one as well! I'll check that out ASAP.

I liked the story if I'm honest I would have liked Sarah and Jareth to deal with the twins rather than crossing them over into twilight

This story was wonderful!

Fantastic story! Though I also grieve for poor Hoggle, the biggest disappointment I have is that this (or anything like it) won't be filmed. I'm not even a fan of "Twilight" or "Dr. Who," but I still admire how you get the pieces to work together.

You call Tolkien and Lewis "pulp fantasists"? Maybe you're the pulp fantasist, kid. At least their stuff is original and immortal, not fanfic...

While I hate the fact you killed off poor, dear Hoggle, I adored your story. It's well written and is woven together like the perfect tapestry, so rich, vibraint and real, I could almost hear the rock falls in the Jewelled Caverns and the chittering of the spiders in the tropical woods. I cannot wait to see what other delights are presented in your story archive!

So are the twins chosen ones of the faeries? From Torchwood? Cause the flower bit, and the wet ground part kind of sound like one of the Torchwood episodes... Anyways good chapter, I'm gonna go finish reading this.

This was *such* a good story! I admit to getting an inkling about Sacha and Ivanka early on - something about them screamed Twilight. :)

I loved your subtle, obsessed Jareth staring at Sarah in the first chapters. Melted my heart. :)

Well done, I loved this story. I am a diehard Jareth/Sarah fan (and Bowie fan in general) and I liked the realistic (relatively speaking given the setting) way their relationship progressed.