This is my third time reviewing, but HAHA. Doctor Who/Labyrinth? I LOVE IT. I did think of Doctor Who when I read about the rift, but did not know it was purposely put there. Very nice.

Even though I hate Twilight, I was entertained with your interpretation of how the witch twins become part of the Volturi.

I freaking love this story and I'm effing terrified of spiders. I almost considered ignoring half the chapter cause I can't stand any spider, let alone anything bigger then a dime.

How come this story has so few reviews? It's hard to find a good Labyrinth story, but this one just fantastic!

OMG!

*FLAILS!*

OMG THE UTTER PERFECTION!

*DANCES*

*SQUEALS LIKE A LOVE SICK TEENAGER*

OMG! THIS WAS JUST...OMG!

The only thing that would have made this perfect? Them hunting down the twins and dispatching of them...as a family.

Beautiful, darling - and saved to read again and again!

*Happy!Hugs*

Mandy

I just wanted to let you know that I completely enjoyed this story. It was a joy to read and I enjoyed you portrayed all the characters. I enjoyed the sharp banter between both Jareth and Sarah and how they didn't just fall into each other's arms. I also enjoyed the background given to him and the fact that you made him part goblin instead of the more common Fannon ideal that he's Fae. It was refreshing shift as well as having the time for Sarah and Jareth to get to really know to each other and work together than pitting them against each other and her falling in love in spite of him trying to trick or ensnare her in some manner.

I also liked Hoggles back story though I was a bit sad at his demise. It made me wonder about Dydimus's past and it also made me wonder about the other wished away children who were never rescued after being wished away. I always saw Sarah as having the run the risk of becoming a member of the labyrinth as well, both in the firey forest when they tried to remover her head and in the junk yard when the others attempted to burden her with all the useless trappings of her childhood possessions. And if other kingdoms had a known habbit of occasionally stealing children to keep their own numbers up, it would made sense that some wished away would end up adopted.

I most certainly noticed the references to Torchwood and Doctor who with the vortex and the fairy induced deaths and it made me smile quite a bit. Though it saddened me to think that the time war may have so damaged that one Kingdom and I wonder if others suffered in the aftershocks of the death of Gallifrey.

Just think if you ever wanted to do a sequal you could have the Doctor cross in the world of the Labyrinth. and if you can put the doctor with the Underworld universe I can't see why not Labyrinth as well if you are ever so inspired.

I honestly didn't put together the two kids being vampires from Twilight because I actually can't stand the series and I usually enjoy vampire lore and fiction. I kept expecting what they became to become a problem that would come and bite Sarah and Jareth back in future years considering they jumped into and were absorbing energy from a time vortex and them ending up where they did especially after being seen by a faculty member made me expect something more.

I also liked how you managed to have Sarah be able to share a longer life with Jareth due to shared blood with her child. I did find the rather vegan diet she preferred as she changed a bit strange. All through the movie, several of Jareth's costumes were adorned with bones and it just seemed a bit strange that to have bones in the armor yet a diet where meat was not tolerated. It's not a complaint just a curiosity though I can understand the dislike of tasting or sensing pesticides used on the food or stuff overly processed and full of chemicals or preservatives.

The shying away from modern tech seemed a bit weird unless it's something to do with the electricity or "human magic" that interfered with other magical energy that was growing within Sarah, herself. Otherwise it wouldn't make sense because she'd grown up around it her entire life.

My only complaint that I can possibly have is that when I got to the end I didn't want that to be the end. I was hoping for more story to find out what happened to the piece of Gallifrey, I doubt it just winked out of exsistence, that maybe it would cause other issues that would need to be dealt with but it was still good where you left it off. I still hope you do come to be so inspired to write a sequel. I love you how you portray the characters and would love to see how Sarah and Jareth's relationship continues to grow and evolve and the children they have and what they may have to deal with in the future.

I hope to read more of your work in the future, take care and do keep writing.

OMG! Mind Blown! I've been reading this for a while, and no way did I expect a twilight reference! But I like it, I like that you were able to combine things. Very cool. I love having the history of Jane and Alec. What a great way to tie that up!

Ah, finally finished.

I really have an intense dislike for the entire twilight series- but the way you have written it is lovely.

Everything makes perfect sense.

I love authors such as yourself, who manage to blend everything together into a perfect concoction and make it seem real.

Keep writing your marvelous stories, I'm going to keep reading them.

Wow.

I am absolutely amazed with the level of talent that you have.

This story is incredible, the amount of detail in the plot, each of the characters, and the complexity of everything!

Truly, you have a gift.

I love the Twilight reference :)

Jane/Alec origin story...sweetness. (And it's always good to see Aro - I do know how much you like him ;)

Magic iPod! Now I want Jareth AND for him to get me an iPod :)

off to read next chapter...

awesome story. good work!

Ivory claws, definitely something I haven't seen done before. I found it interesting, different from the usual "can't let my magic run amok so I wear gloves" type of thing. Interesting story so far, I am enjoying it. :)

I loved reading this so much! It was very well written even though I only caught half the cross-overs/hidden things. Though there was one that you didn't mention in this last chapter here. I forget what chapter it is, but when they first get to the Garden's of Mirage, Didymus mentions following the butterflies, I thought it might be a reference to the second Harry Potter movie when Ron Weasley mentions the same thing.

Other than that, I'm so glad you made Doctor Who references, that just made my day and the whole bit on how Jane an Alec came to be was quite fascinating!

Kudos!