BAHA! I KNEW IT! They were from Twilight! Sweetness!

-brain fizzles-

... You like Twilight. Don't you?

-high five-

That was a great story!

I must admit that I generally don't like when Labyrinth is crossed over, but well done E.A., well done. *smile* *applaud*

This was not cobbled, but well planned with wonderful execution. So much so, that I even enjoyed the little foray into sparkly vampire-dom. It was like a birthday surprise, rather than being clubbed over the head with another series. I do believe I will be checking out your other work. If they are as subtle, and yet readable, as this story is, I am fairly certain that I will enjoy them as well.

I love that you shared your research! It smacks of an A&S submission. Somehow I am not surprised at the SCA reference...

. Thank You for sharing!

~UmmidiaQ

You threw in Twilight?

Well you've done it again another fab story. :) this was just fantastic and satisfying! I truly love your stories :) 3

Excellent story! I loved the random Xover at the end, didn't realise till he said 'Jane' and I was like OMG! AHAHAHAHA! Poor Hoggle though :(

Loved it :D

Wow! Well, the Twilight crossover was a bit unexpected, although it was sort of set up when Jareth described the two kids' powers. The rest of the fic was pretty awesome, though! Lots of Sarah kicking butt and Jareth being smexy. I thoroughly enjoyed it-great job!

I love your writing style however I was kind of disappointed in the last two chapters... they felt like they belonged to a different story the ending too felt a little rushed and parts that felt like they should have explained weren't. Other than that I liked this story.

When I saw the name Alex I should have thought of Alec. I LOVE how you tied them into Twilight, hehe. As for Jareth and Sarah... purfect ending to an awesome story.

It does kinda make me wonder what powers the daughter would possess.

Very interesting reading. Keep smiling. :-)

Uh, did this just turn into a twilight crossover? Yeah, not my favorite fandom. And I was really enjoying Sarah turning goblin...

Squee! Volterra is such a beautiful city! All these references revealing good research make me giddy, they does.

wonderful, wonderful way of turning Sarah "goblin" and solving that whole mortal/immortal problem for Sarah and Jareth. I love the length of all the chapters you have posted and adore the richness and complexity of the plot. Can't wait to see Ch.7

This is really amazing. I'm looking forward to the rest of it! :)

Simply beautiful! The story flows nicely, the plot is captivating and I cant find anything OOC in your portay of Jareth or Sarah (thats rare). But I fear now that our heroes think theyve got all the time in the world, the twin-monsters will show their ugly little faces huh?