|Reviews for Friendship Series|
| darkroses24 chapter 15 . 12/21/2013
Wow .I can believe you stopped there :)
- so glad that lex and his father can have some kind of relationship somehow .I guess blood is always thicker than water .
- Clark have been my favorite character through out this fic . and I liked how cloes he and lex become so sweet .
- The idea for this fic was so creative and sweet .
I dont know what more I could say .other than Thank you for this wonderful amazing fic ..
| darkroses24 chapter 14 . 12/20/2013
Wow I cant tell how angry this chapter made me .
okey .I hate the Kents .they suck ...what was that ?!
first of all : there is a line between stepping into someone life to show him you care And treating that somone lik old .
In this chapter the kents clearly treated lex like a little kid .even if he emotionally unstable .he is not helpless or idiot.
- since when Martha became the person who knows everything ? really stop talking women .
- I think a great clue that lex father is willing to change is that he is willing to put up with the kents crap . God
- and the last part !? lex had every right to be angry .and he didnt say anything wrong .and it bad enough that martha grabbed him by the ear .Jonathan spanked as will !. God almost as if controlling lex is there hobby now
looool sorry about that
great writting thank you
| darkroses24 chapter 13 . 12/20/2013
What the hell was that ?! you know what I am no longer a fan of the kents family
Why did poor lex get all the swats and spanking and Clark got nothing ?! lool
and really at the beginning 20 swat cause he talked back to Jonathan ?! that sound like angr not discipline .
and they wont let thier Clark see some R movie ?! that is over crazy not over protective .
anyway Lool .no really good writing :)
| darkroses24 chapter 12 . 12/20/2013
will the kents adopt me loooool .just kidding
really great chapter . and lots of lines made me laugh ..
Jonathan doesnt really wast time he just starts swatting right away lool
poot lex he got swatted alot in this ch ...Lool
Great work .
| darkroses24 chapter 11 . 12/20/2013
wow ... I am so gald your friend talked into countie with this fic :) amazing.
I am trying to remember what I was doing back in 2006 . lool
anyway . as always this chapter made me feel way too many emotions .
-lex and the history paper loool .in away it reminded of myself in college loool . Man . it seems so lame Now getting upset over grades loool
-This line "So did you want me to fly home tonight so you can spank me, or did you want to wait for this weekend" is just too funny .Lol
- back into darkness .wow the mother killed her baby . that was too shocking . and she was okey with lex taking a blem for killing the baby ! what a monster .
- I had tears in my eays reading what lex said to his mother and brother graves . too sad :(
- lex oh God . it like he is living in hell .both of his parents are monsters .and to top that he had to live all of these years with the guilt thinking he killed his brother :(((
Thank you for this wonderful chapter and this wounderful fic :)
| darkroses24 chapter 10 . 12/20/2013
it amazing how things change quickly in your story.
I am so glad that things got back to normal :)
Jonathan is so good to lex .
I like that you pointed out that Clark wasnt spanked for a year .it kind shows that Jonathan is a good father and only ues spanking when he needs to :)
great chapter :)
| darkroses24 chapter 9 . 12/20/2013
Wow this fic keeps getting better and better .
I can see why this your favorite fic .It sure dig deep into human emotions.
the scnes when lex walked into his father office saying, you are right .was very heart breaking . I I can almsot feel how sad and broken lex felt .
-No matter how hard lex tries to hate his father he cant .He still want to be in his good side. he still dream of his love and approvel .
Thank you for writing :)
| darkroses24 chapter 8 . 12/20/2013
awww :) such a cute and lovely chapter :)
| darkroses24 chapter 7 . 12/19/2013
Wow . I cant believe all that happened in one chapter . you are an amazing writer . :)
-Lex Christmas with the Kents was sweet .and kibd sad . as I said if only real life was like this .
- Lex background story and his father .will this was like the drakest thing I read in fanfiction .not sure what comment on that . God :((( but very excellent writing
-then Jonathan arrives and things goes crazy loool .spanking right away .and the swats in the bathroom ...wow where do you get these ideas .
Anyway .Thank for writing and sharing
| darkroses24 chapter 6 . 12/15/2013
I know there still lots of chapters , But the good byes made me sad :(
God it must be do depressing for lex to get back his house :(((
ah . This fic is really breaking my heart .I just keep thinking , If only things like this happend in real life .The world would have been a better place
Great chapter of course
| darkroses24 chapter 5 . 12/15/2013
Wow very exciting chapter :)
really good job .
Lol at lex swatting Clark :)
| darkroses24 chapter 4 . 12/15/2013
This fic is making sad :(
I feel so bad for lex .he has noone , no family no friends .And the worst part he will leave at the end of the summer :((( poor lex just looking for someone to care about him. :(.this just suck
- liked the swat Jonathan gave to lex loool
- again felt really bad when Jonathan said he wished he could protect him from his father .
Okey enough feeling bad loool ...you are an amazing writier ..thank you
| darkroses24 chapter 3 . 12/15/2013
another great chapter :) here is my random comnents :
- I dont understand why would Jonathan say lex called him and said he is going to visit his dad ?
- Poor Clark .I thought the punishment didnt fit the crime loool. specially since he didnt get any benefit from the lie :(
- Its kind awkward that they heard each other getting spanked
- Nice to see the development of lex/clark friendship :)
- back to lex father lool . I guess he acted this way bacues he got hurt seeing his son happy with another family so he hurt him back :(
- Randome Q : Why is it - not just in your fics- when both parents are there .the father is doing the spanking ?! I dont think its fair to stuck the father with the discipline all the time .
- I am back to not liking Jonathan . I just dont see him feeling sad having spanked his son or lex . I see more like he is statifued that he managed to put them in thier place looooool ( ok mabye I am wrong )
finally , remember when I said , that I hated stories where parents are doing the spanking .? I guess the stories I read were horrible .because I love all your fics regardless of who is doing the spanking
Thank you .and sorry for the long review .
| darkroses24 chapter 2 . 12/15/2013
Wow great chapter . I liked it so much .
-I am not sure how I feel about Jonathan lool . But I liked that when lex first drunk the alchole in the house . He just got rid of the rest of alchole and didnt talk to lex .
- You had a perfect scene that really touched my heart . when Lex watched Clark apologies for yelling . And how at first lex felt sorry for Clark and woundered what was big deal . Then when he saw the hug and the comfort ended up feeling sorry for him self and feeling jealous .
- I really didnt like the fact that clark Parents were okey with lex hanging up the phone on his father . I think they should have encouraged him to respect his father even if what he said bothered him .
- The spanking ,I guess lex had it coming :)
| darkroses24 chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
I think I watched the a few seasons of this show :)
-Clark oh . poor thing it must suck being so board :( and he such a good kid feeling guilty about stealing and confessing to his parents.
- I dont like clark Parents at all .specially the father he seems so full of himself. I never liked them on the show anyway loool .
-poor lex, feeling all the pain and suffering :( I honestly dont think his father is that horrible .I think deep down he loves his son .but he has no idea how the parenting thing works . as we see lots of example like this in real life .
- So clark parents immediately start parenting lex the minute they met him loool I like that .
great first chapter :) Thank you