Reviews for Hours Past Tomorrow
Rebadams7 chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Very powerful emotions

Well done

Reb
Banky chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
Beautifully, poignantly observed. Loved it.

Thank you. x
DelicateRose chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Words can not describe how beautiful this is. You gave us a story with such meaning and a lesson to learn in a broken soul.

So I leave you this poem:

Eyes of passion,

Blue and tender,

A world of love awaits,

A soulmate inside,

Sensual touch,

Sensual sight,

Love is strong tonight,

Love is uniting,

Passion burns brightly,

Bodies engage slightly,

Eyes meet and flutter,

Lips touch and quiver,

Voices play together,

Become one forever,

Stare in her eyes,

See the sky,

For love burns brightly.
mozzer0906 chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
I loved how raw and gritty the emotions were for this. Very well written, I love how you likened it to their canon selves, with Alice being the one who believed in him and Jasper being self-loathing. Well done. I enjoyed this.
MaleficentKnits chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
beautiful...
FearlessPanda chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
I simply love your One Shot.

"This was life. This was love. Raw. Dirty. Broken. Bare. It was fucking love and I was drowning in it. For the first time, I welcomed the rush."

Amazing sentence.

I entered the WLWN Contest, too. And I think your story is one of the best entries.

I just love it.

Much Love,

-Conny
mrsjwwhitlock chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
wow.

this was an amazing story.

you are truly gifted.
MorbidEmoBarbie chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
wow. that was beautiful.
icefang7 chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
wow! this is awsome! thanks
When Love Was New chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
Your story has been validated and added to the C2.

Thank you for your submission.

WLWN Staff