Reviews for Off The Leash
PastOneonta chapter 10 . 10/18/2016
This is very good. My heart was hurting for Neal and his loneliness and his fight within himself. His loneliness for Kate was genuinely painful. He loved her and she ran. He really wanted to run but he knew he would lose Peter and WC and NYC. It must be hard to manage that instinct to run, which I imagine he has had since childhood. The way he tied up Peter was very clever. And the way he and El worked together to bring it to conclusion was lovely. He needed her support. This worked very well. Thanks for writing.
MargaritaS chapter 10 . 5/13/2016
fascinating story
rerichardson4 chapter 10 . 9/17/2015
I really enjoyed reading your story! I think you portrayed the characters accurately and your story was exciting and fun. :)
Drag0nst0rm chapter 7 . 7/15/2015
And you just gave yourself away.
Pandarius chapter 10 . 3/1/2013
WOW
that was so sweet!

IT WAS GORGEOUS!

LOVE!
pandarius chapter 8 . 3/1/2013
Holy crap. that last line. woah. wow. I. wow.

That's BRILLIANT! I MEAN! LIKE! THAT IS SO PETER! AND DEEP!
W0lf-Spirit chapter 9 . 2/16/2013
Neal did make a lot of sense. he tried but he set it up basically so he'd fail. He coulda left without Peter have ever knowing. Very clever. I love El lol
W0lf-Spirit chapter 4 . 2/16/2013
This is sad. I feel so bad for Neal. He's treated like an animal and he's not even violent.
W0lf-Spirit chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
Poor Neal. There was so much distrust in season one.
ClaMiAl chapter 10 . 2/7/2013
That was cute. Loved the story. Seeing Neil through Peter's eyes was fascinating.
carlacipo chapter 10 . 8/15/2012
That was a great story. Do you still write and post somewhere else
EveBB chapter 9 . 5/6/2012
I had read this story a long time ago. I've re-read it and it's as good as I remember it. It's definitely one of the very best White Collar fanfictions I've read. The plot is fantastic, the pacing great, the dialogue believable and Neal's internal struggle great drama. I really love this story. Thanks.
theprincessspy chapter 10 . 11/14/2011
A satisfying ending to an engaging story with some of my favorite characters. Great job, Mojave Dragonfly! I laughed out loud and held my breath. :)
theprincessspy chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Those last lines are some of the most telling for Neal's character - being afraid of himself. Perfect.
ngaerjpgpioubghpignawogib chapter 10 . 10/21/2011
Your portrayal of Neal in this story is just plain amazing. This is exactly the sort of insane internal conflict I imagine actually happening in his head throughout the first season; your situation brings it to life.

Well done!
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