Reviews for Before You Sleep
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
I like it, but I'm still kind of confused about what happened at the end, but I still Ike it and think you should make more chapters
Tiara chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
Likeitbutputmorepagesonthere
Tiarajackson chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
Ilikeitbutputmorechaptersand brokenheartslikeforbrokenhea rtsachapter8peaceoutyall
Tiarajackson chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
Ilikeitandyoushouldputmorech apters
Sesshy's Mate2012 chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
OMG I loved this. You need to continue. Please? :)
Jazzyness chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
Love the concept of this fanfiction. There are a few grammatical mistakes, but otherwise it's very well written.

1)I can't even think anything because only...

maybe: I can't even think about anything because only...

2) "Dylan! There's someone comes looking for you;"

maybe: -There's someone here for you!

or

-There's someone looking for you!

3)but in the end I went from the living room, opened the front door. I surprised...

maybe: but in the end I left the living room, and opened the front door. I was surprised...

When are you updating next? I had a similar idea, but don't want to write anything if you're going to continue the story...
DragonFire Princess chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
Love the story, Hope you'll update ASAP!
AznLee chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
omg! YOu must update! i love this pairing!
slytherinangel01 chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
It's AWESOME! I love Dylan and Akeela pairing. Javier is good but I prefer Dylan.

Please continue writing!
Scarlett Clearwater chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
aww ! lovely! i like javier, but i like better akeelah/dylan .. next chapter .. please !
lambtastic chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
aww this is so cute! i am happy both ways cause i like both dylan and javier. love the story so far but what happened at the end? why did it turn dark? please continue soon!
writewithcourage chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
D'awe. This is so sweet.
Annyxoxo chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
Oh I really like it! Please keep writing! There needs to be more of this pairing!
niknakks chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
keep writin please its good so far!... add more please

:D
CC the Bug chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
How cute!
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