|Reviews for The Spirit of the Archdemon|
| Taeniaea chapter 4 . 10/6/2014
| Tabriel chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
Needs some major editing for grammar and spelling errors. Rouge, after all, is makeup. Your female Cousland is a rogue. Also, please PLEASE for the love of all that's holy stop using 's to pluralize words! The apostrophe is used to denote the possessive, NOT to pluralize.
Adora? Really? Is this a story for second graders? Is the land going to be called Eternia, or Happyville? I guess people are supposed to just ADORE Alistair's new queen, right? And really...we go from Anora to Adora? *sigh*
| half-breed-demon-fox chapter 4 . 3/11/2010
Nice story I've been waiting to read one like this lol...u should countine to update I really wanna see what going to happen
| Linette chapter 4 . 2/24/2010
I would love to see addtional chapters on this story. I think the author shows a gift for knowing and staying true to the story. It strikes a cord and with out more chapters to move the story forward it is like a promise unfulfilled.
Looking forward -
| truthrowan chapter 4 . 12/20/2009
I've been waiting patiently, but an update would be great, especially on such a wonderful and unique story. Please? Pretty Please? As a gift to your fans for the winter holidays?
| Cupcake Heart chapter 4 . 12/8/2009
Oh god, the suspense. What a cliffhanger!
I really like how you've started this story after the ending... inquiring minds wonder about how Morrigan's child will do and we cannot wait for the sequel.
You characterized everyone well! I hope Adora lives, but it will be interesting either way, what with Ceri going into the fade and all to find her.
| Alicorn White chapter 4 . 11/21/2009
OMG I can't believe it you made me cry X_X
You actually made me CRY when Adora died GAH *thrashes* You must write more D8 and QUICKLY
| Alicorn White chapter 3 . 11/21/2009
FAVORITE LINE EVAR:
"Morrigan cackled. “Oh, Ceridwen’s far from heartless, despite everything I’ve tried. She takes after you, in that respect. Your weakness has corrupted my offspring.”
And cheesy names For. The. Win.
| Alicorn White chapter 2 . 11/21/2009
And more reviews you shall get.
BLAST and DAMNATION to those who favorite or alert without leaving a review as to WHY -_-
3 on you. Well written and interesting point of view.
| Alicorn White chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
OH THIS IS ADORABLE D8!
I have nothing else to say other than I am favoriting this and huggling it foreverz!
| Allylynn chapter 4 . 11/15/2009
This story is amazing and so looking forward to reading more keep up the great job that your doing
| Allecto00 chapter 4 . 11/14/2009
Wow! Another good chapter. Thank You!
| Kazic chapter 4 . 11/14/2009
Woo! Looks good so far. I am really enjoying this.
I'm replaying as a dwarf and am having a blast. Still wanting to replay the human noble story and try to get Alistair not to break up with me. any idea?
| Ryoko Metallium chapter 3 . 11/13/2009
I haven't had the chance to play this game yet, but after reading this story I'm dying to do so. I've been itching to read stories of this quality! I cannot wait to read more! Please update soon! I'm excited to read more about Alistair's child!
| Mithrilquill chapter 3 . 11/12/2009
"Fereldan just hasn’t been the same without your ugly face and heartless bitch attitude."
FINALLY! He said it. And we were all thinkin' it ;)...