Reviews for Malcolms Graduation
Ac 3000 chapter 5 . 11/14/2009
tots greatest ending dont worry it was awesome
Ac 3000 chapter 4 . 11/14/2009
Ah! This story is so awesome totally subscribing and favoriting
Ac 3000 chapter 2 . 11/14/2009
Great story. Plus they ended it with louis pregnant, so this is pretty good.
KHwhitelion chapter 5 . 11/9/2009
...too lazy to log in...

XD I thought the ending was sweet :)

I also think it looks better with punctuation-I'm glad you added it! It makes it easier to picture the characters' voices in your head XD

One last thing-I promise I'll shut up after this-when it comes to author's notes, you might want to make a dashed line above it, that separates it from the rest of the story XD

And once again, I'm glad Francis made an appearance at the end XD I love him!
CountryGrl chapter 5 . 11/8/2009
Can I just say, that line about crying out of his mouth? I laughed out loud! So funny. And a sweet ending too.
KHwhitelion chapter 4 . 11/8/2009

So happy!


One thing tho-you don't seem to have punctuation in your dialogue, so it makes it difficult to tell if someone's asking a question or not.

Other than that-yay Francis! *is total fangirl*
CountryGrl chapter 4 . 11/8/2009
Aww...this is very sweet with Malcolm and Emily. I like how you used Coral, too...I figured they'd all fuss over her since she's the only girl, lol.

Btw, did you ever consider getting a beta? Because with a bit of editing, this would be really something.
KHwhitelion chapter 2 . 11/7/2009
Wait a sounds like this is a continuation of "Baby number six" did you get permission from the author to do that? Typically you need permission or they might get mad.

Just a heads up.

KHwhitelion chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
:D Yay!

It looks much better!

Lol Malcolm's a Janitor XD