|Reviews for Diving Headlong|
| samiam77 chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
I honestly think this is my favorite one shot ever! You did such a great job of making it a complete story. Many one shots have very vague areas in an attempt to get across the story in just one chapter. Some don't do a very good job in creating their characters for the same reasons. Yours was just very complete in every way with a great story and a lot of feeling. Awsome job and thanks for writing it!
| kissyourself chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
Wow, that was good :)
I liked it. Never read anything like it... well, not too much, but I liked it nevertheless.
| meadow11 chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
I absolutely loved this story!
| tumblin' di chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Egad, I just loved Edward and Bella in this story. I didn't even realize this story existed. Too fun!
| imsonotdoingthis chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
I was sure there was no way E and B were going to end up together! She was so awkward I literally cringed everytime she was around...in the first part. E was pretty full of himself...
I love that E was the one who instigated the action! He was denying this the whole time and he started it! I love even more that B stood up to him...damn straight!
Great one-shot, thanks for the fun read.
| Sam604 chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
I was starting to get worried that Edward wouldn't man up to having feelings finally for Bella. And what a move Bella did, to get at his Ego. Nicely done!. Enjoyed it a lot. It brought back memories, offsummers at the pool with friends doing nothing but having fun. Great job ladies!.
| MrsBiteMe chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
utterly fantastic. I was weary at first with Edward being all anti-Bella, but it all played out so nicely.
| 2402a chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
I'm from staten island. Thanks for the shout out:))
this was awesome which at this point is probably no surprise but I lack creativity to tell you both how amazig you are
| Elora MacCoinnich chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Don't know why it took me so long to get to this story (oh, well maybe a mile long favorite story list might be the reason) and loved, loved, loved it! So funny and sexy! And maybe it was just me (High. Stoned. Baked. You name it...)but I could swear there were little nods to some of the more talked about fics out there! Brilliant...as always!
| BRANDY0925 chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
That was entirely too cute!
| mommaz1024 chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
wow! love the story.
| Twilight Enabler chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
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| philo22 chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
THIS WAS AWESOME!
oh how the tables have turned,
good on you bella :D
| shortgirl424 chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
Absolutely loved it!
| siggynic chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
Loved this! I especially liked how you described him finally getting into the pool - priceless!