Reviews for Diving Headlong
foufolle chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
i really loved reading your story it was well writen and very funny thanks for sharing it with us
loudashope113 chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Can't believe i am just now reading this! jealous whistleward is amazing! nice collaboration.
Pixie365 chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
Awesome one-shot! The longest one I have seen/read, but I loved every minute of it. Great stuff :-)
Mrs. Jim chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
HA Edward became the "Cockblocker"...see lil Bella you told him you weren't interested anymore and the crazy guy became the "hoverer" and tried to cling to you muhahaha, fortunately/unfortunately you weren't actually trying to get that reaction...all the better
SugarVenom chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
Thanks for bringing dry humping up to an art form. I love a good hump. And the image of Edward, jealous and armed with a whistle, made my day! Thanks!
TwilightGuru09 chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
My God that was good. Talk about the irony of the whole situation. This piece made me happy.D*! I don't get that happy like this. Great writing. D*!
Fangtasia chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
Epic. I loved it, really. :)
reesessweetie chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
ahhah! this story was funny! i love that bella finally managed to snatch up edward in the end! yay her!
Vantastic chapter 1 . 3/2/2010

I like this one and I've recommended it to some girls )



*flat line*

It was really nice to read it and I thought it would work good in a longer version. Have you ever considered doing it?

Thanks and Kiss!
KellBellsCullen chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
This is one of those epic one shots3 i love
Sunsetwing chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
I loved this story, and how everything worked itself out. Loved that Edward learned the hard way.
samiam77 chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
I honestly think this is my favorite one shot ever! You did such a great job of making it a complete story. Many one shots have very vague areas in an attempt to get across the story in just one chapter. Some don't do a very good job in creating their characters for the same reasons. Yours was just very complete in every way with a great story and a lot of feeling. Awsome job and thanks for writing it!
kissyourself chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
Wow, that was good :)

I liked it. Never read anything like it... well, not too much, but I liked it nevertheless.
meadow11 chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
I absolutely loved this story!
tumblin' di chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Egad, I just loved Edward and Bella in this story. I didn't even realize this story existed. Too fun!
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