|Reviews for Diving Headlong|
| Alice chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
This was awesome! It sort of reminded me of one of my summers while I was at high-school... Lol i was giggling the whole time...
The only difference was that there were no joints or smoking, just lots of bad jokes. Oh and I was the one like Edward... a boy keept giving me goo eyes and hated to go in the pool... The kiddos really piss in there a lot! Yuck. but by the end of the summer we hooked up, went on dates and so on. But then in October broke up... Duh that is life.
| angry woman chapter 1 . 2/14/2017
i absolutely hated this story. im sorry, but they're but objectifying girls so fucking badly in this story and i honestly didn't even read past the part where edward said "flat chested glory" or whatever. bravo to edward in the end but are you fucking kidding me? it just pisses me off so badly that if you don't have massive tits and a perfect round ass with a skinny waist and flat stomach, that you're not worth it? and you should be made fun of all your life for it? like fuck this, i don't even regret it when i say, the characters portrayals and just the concept in this story were fucking trash. not to mention, it took some bumping and grinding for edward to finally start to like bella back. i just hate it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2017
This story was so good for so many reasons. It takes you back to High School. You relate to Bella in each phase and also to Edward. I love angst when she ignored him even after the car and he realized it ugh that was the best. I have read it a few times and each time love it more. I thought I would hate Edward when this started but it was written so well that I didn't. Love it!
| lola-cullen-salvatore chapter 1 . 12/16/2016
I liked it
| cullenlover88 chapter 1 . 11/7/2016
cute story,ass Edward to nice edward
| lka01 chapter 1 . 11/7/2016
Very cute ending.
| shannon30033 chapter 1 . 9/8/2016
Fun story! Thanks!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/26/2016
very entertaining ...
| Anono chapter 1 . 8/23/2016
Lol great cringe humor!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2016
| shaz308 chapter 1 . 7/27/2016
This is one of my favourite one shots, well done.
| robertpatzlover09 chapter 1 . 5/8/2016
Its the best
| ChocolateChipCookiesXxo chapter 1 . 4/6/2016
I love this so much
One shots like this are my fave
| Atwiggs chapter 1 . 1/30/2016
Lovely short story! I always want more, too bad for me! I wish your links still worked! Thank you guys for sharing. Are either of you writing real fiction?
| ficfangirl chapter 1 . 10/11/2015
More proof that guys want girls who reject them. Thanks for sharing.