|Reviews for Diving Headlong|
| jmarie1999 chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Awesome. Awesome one-shot. Love it. I know most people probably love the part when he jumps in the pool and kisses her but I have to say that the opening of the pickle jar was very sweet. I don't know why but it's like even though he tried to fight it, his baser instincts to help Bella came through early on. Thanks for the great read.
| nikki 28 chicago chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
impressive. loved it!
| milkmamma chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
.. and I 3 this story "with the force of a thousand stinky cab dry humps"...
| katinki chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Well, now that was not what I expected from the two of you. But I must admit, I enjoyed it quite thoroughly. Very cute, very well written (obviously... do I even need to comment on that?), refreshing. Really very enjoyable read.
| pixiekat7 chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Holy Hell Woman...you know I loved every word of this right? Damn if love doesn't always find a way...
| laughinglucy chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Lots of fun!Thanks!
| Unintended-u chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Wow, absolutely brilliant! This is what I call "angst at the highest level", it's the one that makes your heart clench so tightly that the pain is almost unbearable. Ugh, it's so deliciously addictive!
Thanks for writing!
| pilotnana chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
two of the most talented writers..one amazing beta!
this story rocks!
| ystrad chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
| BlindLittleRain chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
This story made me smile big:)
| monkeywoman chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
I loved it! It was really funny too.
| klel323 chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
I was laughing, crying, caught up in great and not so great high school memories. Great work and lots of fun!
| Ginger98 chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
Yes, it was unbelievably long, but it was SO worth it to get in every bit of wonderfullness the 2 of you had to put in it! I was clutching the arm of the couch all tensed up at the end when he FINALLY kissed her. As he was diving into the water, I even said a few "No!"'s, meaning "Yes!", of course. I was a little tangled up & confused with all the conflicting emotions there! I was wonderful to see them losing their preconceptions of each other, & really seeing them for the people they truly are.
| MarytheUnicorn chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
That was totally awesome!
| cosmo9 chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
Hey EZ & AG that was awesome! I love one shots! Thanks for doing this together and sharing! Love the new story EZ and miss you AG!