|Reviews for Diving Headlong|
| FranSilva chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
OMG, I cried a little bit :(
This was so, so beautiful in a way that I can't even explain.
| PCCTwiFF23 chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
Aww, I remember reading this ling ago and thought I might have reviewed already but I guess not. Anyway, I still remember my first reaction to the story and you know, it hasn't changed one bit. I still feel Bella's longing, the hurt, confusion, everything she ever felt about herself, her family, Edward. And Edward, same thing, only he experienced all Bella did only the other way around, the longing coming around when she didn't want him anymore, or at least realized that she built him up so much in her head and *poof* her moment came when she realized he wasn't so shiny in her eyes any longer... But Edward persevered and realized that he not only wanted what "Jalice" wanted (great name by he way), he wanted it with Bella. Aww...
| beachblonde2244 chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
This was so cute, so much growth and development between the two characters. Great job! :)
| auroraboralis chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
Great story! I loved how the dynamics changed! And, yes I really did laugh out loud!
| ordinary vamp chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
I loved this one shot. Incredibly well written :)
| ssarrahh chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
Very cute! Edward got the girl heheh
| Snuffy10 chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
That was so good! Thank you
| Canyaceme chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
| Jaws28 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
| Iklepixie chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Bless Edward for eventually finding his balls. Secretly wanted Bella to just walk away and leave him to sulk
| creyzi4Edward chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
it's still my all time favorite one shot.
| rubyred753 chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Funny - so glad Bella won him over!
| The Girl With The Umbrella chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Loved it! A great oneshot, I and I adore the part when Edward jumps in the pool just for her.
I really, really liked it.
| CullensTwiMistress chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
omg! i can't believe i'd never read this! loved it!
| MarPauPar chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
i loved it...