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| brynn.brigham chapter 3 . 12/6/2013
This was smoking hot! Loved every bit of it!
| angeltrin1 chapter 3 . 5/13/2013
Wow this was completely HOT! Thank you for this lovely tidbit.
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/6/2013
Aww I wish Jacob was on the bottom
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/3/2012
Gorgeous. That is all the only thing to call this.
| Amaya Bloodriver chapter 3 . 1/11/2012
It ended already? Threesome with werewolf hot vampire and giggly pixie well i like it write more !
| Dantelover051386 chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Wow! When i first read this i was i agony for alice. I was losing my shit sobbing for her pain. so many thought ran though me. i know this is a story of its own and unique. its lovely. i have no issue with same sex relationships. for me personally its the person. if i happen to love the opposite sex or same sex it makes no matter. its the person i am with. same sex or not. but the thing here is different. the way i thought these vampires were wrote is that when they fall in love with there mate that is for eternity. there was no sharing clause there. it was there mate and only there mate for life. they never saw anyone else but there mate. considering the imprinting of the wolf gene was the clause here i guess, but it makes me wonder if jazz and alice are truly mates especially if jazz can love another both emotionaly and sexually. dont doubt there love for one another, but i do doubt if they are truly mates since it was so easy for jake to imprint on jazz and jazz to fall in love with another. i know its fiction, but it begs to question. if one can share there partner with another then it begs to question how strong there love connection is for one another. i know there wrote in a supernatural world here so rules are somewhat bended here. but the fact remains jazz and alice are husband and wife. vows were said and promised. so one might argue that jazz being with jake is cheating on alice even with alice knowing. it also seems that because of the imprint alice has no say in the relationsip of jazz and jake and she has no choice but to go with it, allow it. personally i would call bull shit. knowing how the imprint shit works in all and knowing that if something happened to jazz it would destroy jake i couldnt/wouldnt do that to him/them. i hate to say it, but i would bow out of my marriage to jazz and for more than one reason. one, i know its not all jaspers fault. he had no idea that he would me imprinted on nor had the knowledge that he would fall for someone else, but the fact remains that he did despite his promise to forsake all others. to keep himself to me and only me. be broke his vow to me. again i cant blame him for he had no knowledge that it would happen, but i still could not stand by and watch, share him. its a slap in the face everytime he would leave to be with jake that I wasnt enough for him. second, simply put, i could not share. were not talking about a rare threesome here or occasional fuckery in the marriage bed here. hell, ive been in threesomes before. my partner and i shareed them that is until he started sneaking behind my back for sex with that person and thats when it began as cheating. little did the fucker know that i knew. in my experience threesomes always lead to disastor. ive seen threesomes ruin more marriages/relatinships to many times to say that hey, i think it would work out. eventually feelings come into play, partners wanting alone time, jealously and so one. i cant say for sure its how this would end...its fiction and as a writer myself you can write the ending to your desire.
said that, i would simply tell jazz it was over with us. that he can have jake and i know jake would be thrilled he didnt have to share anymore. i know clearly jazz would argue, that he would say he loved me still, even might say he would leave jake, but given the imprint shit i know jake wouldnt go for that and it might hurt him. it might look weak that i didnt fight for jazz, but i lost the moment jazz fell in love with jake. the moment he fucked jake our marriage would be over. i could not sit back and watch them fuck as alice did and i dont think i could join them especially with jake who is the reason i lost my husband. i also find it hard to believe that everyone seems ok with it. i would think that carlisle, esme, emmett and rose, edward and bella would argue this. that jazz was mated already, married to alice and that he could not even entertain a relationship with jake. do wedding vows mean nothing in the supernatual world. sounds like it. then again this is the supernatual world in fiction and the rules can be bent. i would leave. give jazz my blessing and seek out that man or woman that would love me and ONLY me. im sure it would hurt jazz, but i couldnt watch the person i love with another. the strength of the imprint implys that if something happened to one, it affects the other. it would have to be ME that leaves. i could not let jake suffer for making jazz choose me and inturn it would hurt jazz by not being with jake. as alice said once a vampire changes it solid. so jazz's love for jake is solid and even though i know jazz's love for me is solid for our half i still couldnt stand by and watch my man with another. professing his love to him as he does me. its not fair to me or to them. so i would give my blessing and leave them to there happiness. sure jazz would hurt i was gone, but in this case with the imprint shit my leaving would be best.
its a great stoy. love the writing. these are just MY thoughts if it were me in alices place. your writing is awesome. some painful, but awesome nonetheless. ;)
| basaltone chapter 3 . 2/7/2011
Very sweet story, which I wasn't expecting at the beginning, considering the topic. I found myself rooting for the 3 of them to work it out. I am glad they all got their HEA. Thanks.
| Robpfan chapter 3 . 12/29/2010
That was the best love triangle I've read... I really enjoyed it, even with Jake in it... love really is unconditional here...
Merry christmas and a happy new year...
| Jessypt chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
Oh bb... this was just awesome! I love this whole concept!
| MissiYoung chapter 3 . 11/30/2010
re: the apology in your a.n.
you should apologize. it's not nice to make your reviewers melt into a puddle of lusty goo on their leather recliners. don't you know how difficult leather is to clean, especially when the person cleaning is the goo in question?
that said your fic is amazing, as i am realizing is usual for you (having only found your fics tonight). thank you very much for sharing it with me.
| If You Do Not Know Me chapter 3 . 11/29/2010
The smut was so sensual, the lovin' so tender - just beautiful!
| If You Do Not Know Me chapter 2 . 11/29/2010
So Jacob never tells Alice about his first time with Jasper, I can see why he held that for himself... I love that they move into a house together, the 3 of them...
| If You Do Not Know Me chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
Out of all the Twilightships... breaking up Jasper & Alice is just unimaginable to me, that and Carlisle & Esme, just no, ain't happening... but adding Jake to the mix is a really COOL idea & created some really HOT lemons!
| Reijilie chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
*loves* einfach_mich hooked me up with this story and I'm so glad she did. I love this pairing! Great job bb :D
| Dahlia J Black chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
I stumbled upon this by eavesdropping on someone's twitter conversation and oh, what a lucky twist of fate that was. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.