Reviews for If You're Mine
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2020
This was perfect
RunsWithWolves77 chapter 1 . 9/19/2019
Excellent writing. Great story. So real. Thanks.
JakeNessieAddict chapter 1 . 6/21/2018
Just Wow! I love your style of writing. With really simple words and flawless script. Always heart touching. I'm a big fan of your stories, "if you're mine", "hands on me", "undeniable", "A tale told in four kisses". Once I start reading, I never wanna stop.
TheAuthorWhoWrote chapter 1 . 11/29/2017
i love your Jacob and Renesseme stories please make moreif possible
tee4dree chapter 1 . 6/6/2017
Sooo sweeet! Thks!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2016
uwaaahhhhhhhhh thts so awesome..I melted into goo reading this ..superbbb
xoxopercafanaticxoxo chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
My heart... It can't... It can't take all of this perfection!

Well written - I enjoyed every second of it :)
Yum-Yum-Yum-Bubblegum chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
Well done! I liked it! :) I am a fan of all your twilight stories :)
Anon chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
Wow. Just beautiful and perfect!
x-HaTeThAtILoVeYoU-x chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
That was so beautiful.
Gowl chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Man that was so intense I totally love the way you write. I could not stop reading it and it felt so intense. I'm in love with the story.
prisonerofsasskaban chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
I'm not even a fan of Nessie/Jake (usually), but this was very sweet. :)
jkh1920 chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
I appreciate the grace in which you've told this story. Nessie doesn't realize how her feelings/desires have changed but they are still firmly planted in the chaste category. I remember that's what it felt like when I was younger. The closeness of romantic love and touch and the culminating point of that age was The Kiss, (and nothing further than that) was what I remember craving. Thank you for putting this innocent beautiful stage to words. My high compliments!

Your writing overall is of the highest caliber and is by far my favorite fan fiction.
EmbryCrumbleCakes chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
Aww loved it! :)
AngelHeartFantasy12 chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
Awwwwwwww! That was so sweet adding this my favs!
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