Reviews for If You're Mine |
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![]() ![]() This was perfect |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent writing. Great story. So real. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() Just Wow! I love your style of writing. With really simple words and flawless script. Always heart touching. I'm a big fan of your stories, "if you're mine", "hands on me", "undeniable", "A tale told in four kisses". Once I start reading, I never wanna stop. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your Jacob and Renesseme stories please make moreif possible |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sooo sweeet! Thks! |
![]() ![]() uwaaahhhhhhhhh thts so awesome..I melted into goo reading this ..superbbb |
![]() ![]() ![]() My heart... It can't... It can't take all of this perfection! Well written - I enjoyed every second of it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done! I liked it! :) I am a fan of all your twilight stories :) |
![]() ![]() Wow. Just beautiful and perfect! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so beautiful. |
![]() ![]() Man that was so intense I totally love the way you write. I could not stop reading it and it felt so intense. I'm in love with the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not even a fan of Nessie/Jake (usually), but this was very sweet. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I appreciate the grace in which you've told this story. Nessie doesn't realize how her feelings/desires have changed but they are still firmly planted in the chaste category. I remember that's what it felt like when I was younger. The closeness of romantic love and touch and the culminating point of that age was The Kiss, (and nothing further than that) was what I remember craving. Thank you for putting this innocent beautiful stage to words. My high compliments! Your writing overall is of the highest caliber and is by far my favorite fan fiction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww loved it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwwwwww! That was so sweet adding this my favs! |