Reviews for The Price of Permanence
dazzledtina chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Great, i cant wait to read more. And Emmett has a daughter? Rosalie seems quite taken with her.
Los Grotos chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Should I be walking away or should I stay and hope?
Marianka chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
I like it.:)
b3j02 chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
I know that this is Sin and Incivility from Edward's pov but I was wondering if you were going to go beyond where it ended. I love this first chapter already and I can't wait to read what happens next. I think it will be very interesting to see Edward progress from where he is at this point in the story to where he ends up. Great chapter! Have a great weekend!
ToBeaRathbone chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
okay... now you've totally lost me. wasn't the engagement party after he'd met bella? had emmett and rose slept together yet? were the last part of the chapter right after the first? or was it months, years, later?
emamula chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
It's finally here! :]
bmango chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Yay! It starts before he leaves! I have to say, I'm so excited to be reading this story from EPOV. I recently re-read S&I, and because you can only review any chapter once (darn FF) I couldn't gush over it again. Still amazing - can't wait for this story... -b
khytruckle chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
I loved Sin and Incivility and I am so delighted that you are writing the EPOV. Based on this chapter, it promises to be wonderful. Thanks for writing it.
outtayourface chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Very nice pastiche!

I am so glad for this new perspective. Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeves.

And btw, that smut scene was perfect. Their distance was subtle but also clear. Does that make sense? Lol. Anyway can't wait for the next update! Keep it up :)
Samolly chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Adding the baby was brilliant! In have been waiting for this story and it is already better than I imagined.
edwardbabymomma chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
great chapter
patch138 chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
my my...cant wait to c where this goes...

dancnstacy09 chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Too bad when he comes back Rose and Emmett will be bumping uglies...but he'll meet Bella and it will be all good.
ecullen'sgirl chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
This is a great first chapter. I really want to read more. Please hurry with the next chapter. Wonderful to read EPOV.
PolkaDotMama chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Sin and Incivility is one of my favorite stories of all time. It's the one I always tell people who are new to FF to read first because of all the styles you use and because it is just...perfect. (I do tell them to bare with James. Haha) So, when I woke up to this today, I was ecstatic!

It is going to be so much fun reading this from EPOV. I can already see he's not *in love* with Rosalie. He does love her though. :) I look forward to seeing your writing styles each chapter. Thank you for this treat! :D
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