|Reviews for A Forbidden Love Triangle|
| Kitt Kalibur chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
This story needs more too it then what you are putting out. Keep all of your damn paragraphs and sentences in the right order for one thing. It needs more depth because you stopped it right there making the ending very weak.
| BrokenArtist chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
I read it!
I didnt review it either!
| The animator 9000 chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
Amazing. a 100/100! I only had to read the first page to know how good it was. can you give me some publishing tips?
| Thelastgreatrocker18 chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
Cool story, please continue.
bear in mind i don't review a lot, so the fact that i'm reviewing on this story is very rare. I love it that much. Can't wait to see what happens.
Love the Nirvana references. Though i think that 'Sayne laley' might be a good person to reference in a future chappie.
| Loveisuniversal345 chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
LOL! People acually write FF for pacman? You have a really good technique, but a t times you could put a littole more voice into your writing. Graet story!