Reviews for Love Hina: Flight of the Hornet
ChronoTriggerMan chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
I feel this story should be bumped up to an "M" rating, 'cause there's some very erotic, sexual scenes here. Other than that, super story!
ChaosRune chapter 2 . 2/25/2012
This fic lost any shred of credibility when you made Kanako attracted to Naru
SumGhai chapter 5 . 7/20/2011
A most enjoyable yarn you have there, fellow Kiwi. I did not particularly care for the hot and heavy scenes, but I quite enjoyed the depth of description of the character's thoughts, emotions and surroundings.

Taking a 3POV from a Hornet is quite clever, I shall say. You have played for laughs Kyle's reactions to his various predicaments quite well.

I'm slowly working my way through your sequel, and look forward to writing another positive review soon.
Major Mike Powell III chapter 5 . 6/12/2011
Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! 1º review, bitches!





Hellz ya! MOAR yuri! I LOEV it! X3

And then, oh Gawd, The Great Escape! ROFLOL THAT was freakin' rad! XD

Indeed: Kyle was cursed. May Fred rest in peace.

And I was pretty surprised by the ending! :O So, Naru and Keitaro ARE married! O_o That can't end well! ROFLOL I sense chaos comin' up! :P

But for now, my friend...

Mission complete! Helluva freakin' job, Doc!

Now, return to base for debrief and re-arm! You've got another mission comin' up!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
TharzZzDunN chapter 4 . 6/2/2011
Love the point of view from the hornet!

I think I love Naru getting a good spanking even more!
Love Hina Fan-101 chapter 4 . 5/31/2011
I just want to know 1 thing.

Why the hell have Motoko and Kitsune gone lesbian and with each other?
Major Mike Powell III chapter 4 . 5/29/2011
Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! 1º review, bitches!

Now, THIS...was...X3

Oh Hellz ya! KeixMutsu WIN right from the get go! Mmmmm...Mutsu-chan in...a...really skimpy...nurse outfit...(Nose bleeds)



(Nose bleeds)




(Nose bleeds)




And THEN! I hope you catch many people by surprise with KitxMotoko! ;D 'Cuz THAT was S-W-EET!

And...a drunk hornet...seriously?


WIN! I could, like, totally picture a naked Kitsune flailing away with that sake bottle with Kyle inside! XD

And then, Kyle is outta the he thinks! ;D

Oh and Hellz ya I wanna read that spin-off! X3 I want it up and runnin' ASAP, Doc!

But for now, let's see who is up next! ;D

Helluva freakin' job! Keep it up!

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Raug'moss chapter 3 . 5/22/2011
Nice. Wish Kanako'd gone a little farther, but that's just me being a little sadistic. It's not like Naru isn't going to earn it eventually (She's too stubborn for her own good. She might decide to ignore Kanako's warning, too. Depends how mad she gets, really). Keep up the good work!
Major Mike Powell III chapter 3 . 5/22/2011
Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! 1º review, bitches!

Now, THIS!



Welcome back, my friend! O

Naru, Naru, Naru...she Fails. I give her a Godzilla Facepalm.

And of course, I digg how Kanako sorta "evolved" during the course of the chapter, to delicious results! O

Though I DID cringe at Kanako's thoughs of what she coulda done with Kyle! O_o Like...DANG!

Now, let's see who Kyle stumbles upon next! ;D

Helluva freakin' job, Doc!

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Hoori chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
Thank You Very Much! Doctor-T and Major Mike Powell III

I enjoyed this story, I'd love to see more Love Hina stories

(especially with Mutsumi (- ).

I am glad that people are taking the time to wright fan fic with Mutsumi, she is the sweetest thing I don't know how anyone could not like her.

She is nice by choice if some people would read the manga maybe they would understand that Mutsumi is very important to the main story it was her, Naru and Keitaro in that sandbox that day and when it gets down to the bottom line it's going to be Mutsumi or Naru the other girls where outside that.

I think Mutsumi is very kind and very sweet as where Shinobu is shy I'm no pedo so I don't go for romantic things involveing Shinobu, Kaolla or Sarah.

It's one thing to be a "strong independent woman" but Naru's just abusive I mean WHY! shes the equivalent to a female jerk

Motoko's no better.

Mitsune "Kitsune" Konno is very "O.K." with using her womanly wiles to get what she wants she has a huge greedy streak and shes sauced 88% of the time

I don't want to even talk about that "thing" Kanako she is like an embodiment of cancer that loves incest.

So I wonder why any body would not like Mutsumi? she may act ditzy but she is in fact very smart.

I believe that what some perceive as air-headedness is her very kind disposition,she is just over all good.

She's not boring at all she is so nice kind and caring of others feelings and she has a wonderfully cute quirky personality that keeps her from becoming a mary-sue.

Mutsumi's is not slutty she loves Keitaro not any guy that goes by.

She's definitely not bi-sexual that kiss was just a way to

make Naru not be pissed about Mutsumi kissing Keitaro

besiddes if Naru had spoke up to begin with Mutsumi wouldn't have kiss Kei in the first place.

She wouldn't try to take Keitaro from Naru the only way she would proceed to go for Keitaro, is for him not to have feelings for Naru in a romantic way.

Even then if Naru liked him Mutsumi would try to help Naru

to get him.

She's one of the proverbial peices of what could be called the Love Hina "tri-force"

I do love both you guys stories,please don't stop writeing!

few hours ago it was March 3 so HAPPY BIRTHDAY MUTSUMI!
Xoroth chapter 2 . 3/10/2010
An interesting and well written story. Can't help but wonder what shenanigans are going to happen next.
Dan chapter 2 . 1/18/2010
Man, what's with the all hatin' on Naru?
A Dude named Dud chapter 2 . 1/18/2010
Ooh... well... Erm, this is quite the interesting story...

Not much to say beside the occasional grammer mistake

Um, viva la hinata...
rincewind1990 chapter 2 . 1/5/2010
Good story so far and hope you continue soon (as well as Crime and Punishment)

When it was posted i at first stopped reading because it seemed like it was going to be seen through the hornets viewpoint all the way through (plus the fact you spent nearly 10 paraghraps describing the hornet and its life before you introduced a character from the main cast ie the Apron-Wearing Destroyer) which initally put me off but after you posted the second chapter and read the reviews i decided to give it another chance and i'm glad that i did.

anyway i hope you post the next chap soon (cant wait to see what kanako has been getting up to)
Anmynous chapter 2 . 1/4/2010
I think the placement in time of the story is a bit off - Narus attitude in particular doesn't gel with how she behaved after her own reveal, and canceling out the marriage like that feels kind of forced.

The idea itself works great, though. Maybe a bit of OOC-ness with the swearing.
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