|Reviews for Tag, I'm It|
| Girltech101 chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Okay that last line was like the hottest thing ever ahah XD I LOVED THIS. It was so adorable.
| dramaqueen101 chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
aww!i like this ending better.
| Rosa Cotton chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
A very nice alternate ending. You had Peter very much in character, and how you wrote him making his decision was very believable. *sigh*
Wonderful job done!
| head in the clouds 14 chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
Aww super cute
Loved it :)
| Miss.Farmgirl chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
You must have got an A!
| Misunderstood Understandings chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
Aww, I thought it was cute, that should have been the real ending.
| hatsa chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
| Loving-Chakra chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
aw! So cute how romantic, I take a creative writing class too! But We are not allowed to write about scuicide or romance
| Alice.Liddle chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
i love peter pan. and the concept of this story is adorable.
i would've LOVED for peter pan to actually end this way :)
| i'm not ulysses chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
Augh, I'm SO glad I stumbled upon this story! *heart*
If only this were the ending! If only! ;_; A very satisfying one at that. This is very well written, instant favourite. I'm so happy people are still writing Peter Pan fics until today. (: Thank you so much for creating this piece.
| Wendy Brune chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
Very nice alternate ending. I really think you kept Peter in character; he was still boyish and mischievous, yet you were able to make him choose to grow up in a believable way. The final line also contributed to a believable ending, as "tag" is a children's game.
The only suggestion I would make would be to try writing it in third person. The book is in third person, and would make this ending more plausible as a alternate ending.
| kasmira36 chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
I guess your alternative ending is the 2003 movie not the book, isn't it?
As an extreme Peter/Wendy (of the movie)lover I must say, good job. Sweet and innocent, I do like it!
| Chellybaby chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
I have to agree with LadyLioness; I completely agree. You ending is much better. In some ways it's more sad, but in others much happier than the original ending. You did the novel justice! :D
| LadyLioness chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Aw! That's so SWEET! To be honest, I like your ending much better than the original!