very good! cant wait for more :)

Ooh, great start. I love protective!Sam standing over Dean with the knife. And bonus points for using "susurration". :)

You did a great job with showing Dean's sense of confusion and disorientation here, and also of time sliding by as he slips in and out of consciousness.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Oh, what an awesome start! As much as I'm a limp!Sam gal, I have to say I love some hurt!Dean and protective Sam thrown into the mix.. :)

I'm loving the sound of this monster and I can't wait to see what you have in store for the boys.

Great banter too! :D

Hi, Great start, lots of hurt Dean with Sammy taking care of big brother, what more could a girl ask for. x

Awesome start, but then again, your writing is always awesome, so I expected nothing less!

M hurt Dean :-) Shall look forward to more.

i really like where this story is going, can't wait for the next chapter!

oh that was awesome. So brilliant. You are amazing. You have such a gift for writing, and it just is even better when it's Sam and Dean! You know you have been my favorite from day one...